Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“keep Diaries”应为“keep diaries”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意大小写和语法。

例: To be honest, I don't write very often because, as a university student, I usually keep diaries and notes online.

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I like to write sample essays because they help me understand how to complete my homework more effectively.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，句子未结束，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，并提供具体细节支持。

例: To be honest, I don't think the things I write will change because I always record them carefully in my notebook and keep it safe.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient in this digital age. I can type quickly on my phone, which I always have with me.

× I just keep Diaries and notes online.

✓ I just keep diaries and notes online.

这里的'Diaries'不应该大写，且'keep'后面直接跟名词复数形式，不涉及动词-ing形式错误。主要是大小写错误，需改为小写。

× if I want to finish my homework, I would.

✓ if I want to finish my homework, I will.

这里表示将来意愿或计划，应该用情态助动词'will'而不是'would'，因为'would'通常用于虚拟语气或过去将来时。

× I would. I will write down some sample essays to give an example that I can finish my homework better.

✓ I will write down some sample essays to give an example so that I can finish my homework better.

句子中不应同时使用'would'和'will'，且连接词用'so that'更合适，表示目的。

× I think the things I've read wouldn't change because I always keep it down in my notebook and I'll keep it safe and.

✓ I think the things I've read won't change because I always write them down in my notebook and I'll keep them safe.

这里表示对未来的推测，应该用'won't'而非'wouldn't'；'keep it down'应改为'write them down'；'it'应改为'them'，指代复数的'things'。

× And I'm always in my always hold the phone in my hands.

✓ And I always hold my phone in my hands.

原句结构混乱，重复使用'always'且语序错误，需调整为正确的主谓宾结构。

× And it is.

✓ (删除该句)

该句不完整，缺少谓语和明确含义，应删除以保持句子完整性。