Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“her right”应为“writing”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并且回答要更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't write a lot because I find writing difficult. I prefer typing since it is faster and more convenient.

提案: 回答中表达的内容较为混乱，建议明确表达写作内容，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。同时，注意词汇的准确使用。

例: I like to write about sports and share my life on social media because it is a fun way to record my experiences and get feedback from friends.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，建议用更准确的词汇和句式表达观点，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because as I gain work experience and mature, my perspectives and writing style will develop.

提案: 回答基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“when I writing”应为“when I am writing”。建议注意语法准确性，并丰富表达。

例: I prefer typing when I am writing because it is faster and more convenient. I can easily edit my words and save my work on the computer.

× No, I don't like her right, because I think it's so difficult.

✓ No, I don't like writing, because I think it's so difficult.

这里的 'her' 用法错误，应该用名词 'writing' 来表达不喜欢写作。代词使用不当导致句意不清。

× I prefer I prefer typing because I think it's fast and convenient.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it's fast and convenient.

句子中重复了 'I prefer'，应删除多余部分，保持句子简洁。

× I like to write social media, sports, to share my life with my friends because I think it is a fun way to record my life and it can receive feedback.

✓ I like to write on social media and about sports to share my life with my friends because I think it is a fun way to record my life and receive feedback.

'write social media' 应该用介词 'write on social media'，并且列举内容时应使用连词 'and'，使表达更准确。

× Yes, I think all the things I write would change because I can undergo some things such as work experience.

✓ Yes, I think all the things I write will change because I can undergo some experiences such as work experience.

'undergo some things' 表达不准确，应使用 'undergo some experiences'，使语义明确。

× I prefer typing when I writing because I think this way is fast and convenient.

✓ I prefer typing when I am writing because I think this way is fast and convenient.

缺少助动词 'am'，导致时态错误，正确表达进行时态应为 'I am writing'。

× I can change my words and store in the computer.

✓ I can change my words and store them in the computer.

动词 'store' 后应加宾语 'them'，并用介词 'in' 表示存储位置，句子更完整。