Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免列举过多同类词汇。可以直接说明写作频率，并简要说明原因。

例: No, I don't write very often because I usually prefer speaking or reading to writing.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够流畅，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，同时可以增加细节使回答更具体。

例: I like to write in my diary because it helps me express my feelings, and I enjoy decorating the pages with colorful pens and stickers to make it more personal.

提案: 回答思路清晰，但表达略显生硬，建议使用更自然的连接词和句式，使表达更流畅。

例: I believe that predictions I write might change over time, but facts or events I've already recorded won't change because they have already happened.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，逻辑不够连贯，建议明确表达偏好原因，并使用连贯的句子结构。

例: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feel of the pen on paper, and it helps me think more clearly compared to typing.

× No, I rarely write things like essay or fiction or articles.

✓ No, I rarely write things like essays, fiction, or articles.

这里的“essay”应该用复数形式“essays”，因为前面用了“things like”，表示列举多种类型的写作，应该保持一致的复数形式。

× If I have to say that is my diary, I like to write my feelings in it and I want like to decorate it with stickers or some beautiful color pen.

✓ If I have to say, that is my diary. I like to write my feelings in it and I want to decorate it with stickers or some beautiful colored pens.

“I want like to decorate”中“want like”用法错误，正确应为“want to”。另外，“some beautiful color pen”应改为“some beautiful colored pens”，因为“pen”应为复数且形容词应为过去分词形式修饰名词。

× But things already happened that I wrote it.

✓ But things that already happened, I wrote them.

“I wrote it”中的“it”指代不明确，且句子结构不自然，改为“I wrote them”更符合语法，且“things”是复数，代词也应为复数形式。

× I just can't control the type of word that I can write.

✓ I just can't control the type of words that I can write.

“word”应为复数“words”，因为“type of words”表示一类词语，且与上下文一致。