Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного неестественный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать более правильные выражения и избегать повторов. Например, вместо "I just write on my own diary" лучше сказать "I often write in my personal diary".

例: Yes, I write quite a lot, mostly essays for practice and entries in my personal diary.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении, а также нечетко выражена мысль. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более четко структурировать ответ, избегая лишних слов.

例: As I mentioned, I enjoy writing essays to improve my language skills. Additionally, I keep a personal diary where I record my feelings and emotions.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более четко выражать мысли. Также стоит избегать повторов и излишних слов.

例: I believe my writing will change over time because sometimes I forget to write in my diary, and I also write essays frequently.

提案: Ответ в целом понятен, но содержит небольшие грамматические ошибки и избыточные слова. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более плавные связки.

例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and faster, allowing me to write anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I usually write a lot of essays or I just write on my own diary.

✓ Yes, I usually write a lot of essays or I just write in my own diary.

The word 'diary' is singular and should be preceded by 'my own' and the correct preposition is 'in' not 'on'. This is a singular and plural issue combined with preposition usage, but mainly singular noun usage with correct preposition.

× Yes, I usually write a lot of essays or I just write on my own diary.

✓ Yes, I usually write a lot of essays or I just write in my own diary.

The correct preposition to use with 'diary' is 'in' because you write inside the diary, not 'on'.

× So as I said, I love to ride in essays to improve my language skills and also I like to keeping a personal diary and I write all my feelings, emotions that I had in.

✓ So as I said, I love to write essays to improve my language skills and also I like keeping a personal diary where I write all my feelings and emotions.

The phrase 'love to ride in essays' is incorrect; it should be 'love to write essays'. Also, 'like to keeping' should be 'like keeping' or 'like to keep'. The phrase 'that I had in' is incomplete and unclear; it is better to say 'where I write all my feelings and emotions'. This involves incorrect verb usage and preposition errors.

× So as I said, I love to ride in essays to improve my language skills and also I like to keeping a personal diary and I write all my feelings, emotions that I had in.

✓ So as I said, I love to write essays to improve my language skills and also I like keeping a personal diary and I write all my feelings and emotions.

After 'like', the verb should be in the gerund form 'keeping' or the infinitive 'to keep'. Here, 'like to keeping' is incorrect; it should be 'like keeping'.

× I think they will change because even now I sometimes forgot about keep writing in my in my diary and also I write essays much.

✓ I think they will change because even now I sometimes forget to keep writing in my diary and also I write many essays.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is correct. Also, 'about keep writing' should be 'to keep writing'. 'Write essays much' is incorrect; 'many essays' is the correct quantifier.

× I think they will change because even now I sometimes forgot about keep writing in my in my diary and also I write essays much.

✓ I think they will change because even now I sometimes forget to keep writing in my diary and also I write many essays.

The phrase 'forgot about keep writing' is incorrect; it should be 'forget to keep writing'. Also, 'in my in my diary' has a repeated phrase; it should be 'in my diary'.

× I think they will change because even now I sometimes forgot about keep writing in my in my diary and also I write essays much.

✓ I think they will change because even now I sometimes forget to keep writing in my diary and also I write many essays.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'essays' is countable, so 'many' is the correct quantifier.

× I prefer to typing because it's more convenient for me and also it's faster to write something and I can write something anytime or and anywhere.

✓ I prefer typing because it's more convenient for me and also it's faster to write something and I can write something anytime and anywhere.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. 'Prefer to typing' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer typing'. Also, 'anytime or and anywhere' is redundant; 'anytime and anywhere' is correct.