Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
You write a lot? Yes, of course. My university usually give a lot of tasks such as assignments or some dissertations for us to write. So for example, I generally write some topic like financial market or economy tricks. They generally put a lot of words on our shoulders.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
Well, I prefer to write personal journals because it's a really comfortable experience. When I read journals, I can freely express my emotions and record the things I do in my daily life. That can be a memory through my whole life.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
Yes, I believe the things I read will change in the future. That's because in a different time my writing styles were quite different from each other. For example, when I was young age I generally read some short stories, but when I growing up I would write more complex.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
Well, I prefer handwriting when I am writing. For example, when I prepare for some examination, I prefer paper resources so I can write something on the paper. Consequently, I enjoy the paper sounds.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 65.0提案: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然。建议直接回答问题，避免重复“write a lot”，并且注意语法，如“my university usually gives”。可以用更具体的例子来丰富内容。
例: Yes, I write quite a lot because my university assigns many tasks, including essays on topics like the financial market and economic strategies. These assignments often require extensive research and writing.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答较好，但“when I read journals”应为“when I write journals”。建议注意用词准确性，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。
例: I prefer writing personal journals because it allows me to freely express my emotions and record daily experiences. Moreover, these journals serve as lifelong memories that I can revisit anytime.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中出现了混淆，如“things I read”应为“things I write”。语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用正确时态和表达。
例: Yes, I think my writing will change over time because my style has evolved. For instance, when I was younger, I wrote simple short stories, but now I tend to write more complex and detailed pieces.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达清晰，但“paper sounds”表达不够自然。建议用更地道的表达方式，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when preparing for exams, I like to write notes on paper, which also gives me a satisfying tactile experience.
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