Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够直接，且内容偏离了问题。建议直接回答是否经常写作，并简洁说明原因，避免无关内容。

例: Yes, I write quite often, especially emails and notes for work, because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I like writing about my daily life and emotions because it helps me express my feelings and relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: Yes, what I write changes with my emotions. When I feel down, I try to write positive things to motivate myself to handle problems better.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不完整。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer typing because it allows me to edit my writing anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient. Also, typing helps ensure my writing is clear and neat.

× I don't worry a lot but I have other habits like watching videos and reading.

✓ I don't write a lot but I have other habits like watching videos and reading.

这里学生误用了动词'worry'（担心），而题目问的是写作习惯，应使用动词'write'（写）。这是动词使用错误，属于时态和动词选择问题。建议根据上下文选择正确动词。

× I like writing personal something about personal day life like the emotion and things happened on that day which helps me express my feelings and relax after a busy day.

✓ I like writing something personal about daily life, like emotions and things that happened on that day, which helps me express my feelings and relax after a busy day.

句中'personal something about personal day life'结构混乱，'personal'重复且位置错误，'day life'应为'daily life'，'things happened'缺少关系代词'that'。需要调整词序和添加关系代词，使句子通顺。

× Yes, the things I write who changed along with my emotion when I was a bit down.

✓ Yes, the things I write changed along with my emotions when I was a bit down.

句中'who changed'错误使用了关系代词'who'，应直接用动词过去式'chaged'修饰'things'。此外，'emotion'应为复数'emotions'。这是过去时态和关系代词使用错误。

× I might write something more positive to motivate myself to better cope with problems.

✓ I might write something more positive to motivate myself to better cope with problems.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× I prefer typing when I'm writing because typing can alter my article anytime and anywhere. It's really convenient and typing can ensure my writing is clear and.

✓ I prefer typing when I'm writing because typing allows me to alter my article anytime and anywhere. It's really convenient, and typing can ensure my writing is clear.

句子末尾不完整，缺少内容。'alter my article'更自然表达为'allows me to alter my article'。句中连接词'and'后应有完整句子。需要补全句子结构，使表达完整。