Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复，如“to to”应改正。同时，回答可以更自然流畅，增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I don't write very often, usually just a few times a month when I feel inspired. For example, I often write journals to express my thoughts and feelings.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: I usually write down creative ideas and my current feelings, which often come from my job and life experiences. These writings inspire me and help me stay motivated.

提案: 回答较好，但可以通过增加连接词和具体细节使表达更丰富和自然。

例: Yes, I believe my writings will change as I get older because my experiences and perspectives will evolve, which will influence the topics I choose to write about.

提案: 回答内容完整，但句子衔接稍显生硬。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Actually, I prefer typing because it's easier and faster to edit. Moreover, I can quickly make changes and store my work on my computer, and using my phone makes it even more convenient.

× Don't write very often actually, usually a few times a month when I have some inspiration.

✓ I don't write very often actually, usually a few times a month when I have some inspiration.

句子缺少主语“I”，导致句子结构不完整。英语句子必须有主语和谓语，缺少主语会使句子不完整。建议在句首加上主语“I”。

× For example, I will write journals to to express my thoughts and feelings.

✓ For example, I will write journals to express my thoughts and feelings.

句中出现了重复的介词“to to”，这是拼写错误。应删除多余的“to”，使句子正确流畅。

× I usually write down some creative ideas and current feelings that usually from my job and life experience and they can always give me some inspiration and made me keep motivated.

✓ I usually write down some creative ideas and current feelings that usually come from my job and life experience, and they can always give me some inspiration and keep me motivated.

“that usually from my job and life experience”缺少动词，应加动词“come”使句子完整。并且“made me keep motivated”时态不对，应改为“keep me motivated”保持时态一致。

× and they can always give me some inspiration and made me keep motivated.

✓ and they can always give me some inspiration and keep me motivated.

“made”是过去式，与前面的“can”情态动词不搭配，应使用动词原形“keep”保持时态一致。