Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I read a lot because I enjoy creating some derivative work about some famous movies such as Harry Potter or The Social Network.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
As mentioned before, I like write a fan fictions based on famous movies because I want to create a.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
No, I don't think I'll change things to write because I've written fan fiction for five years and I really enjoyed it and I will continue to continue to writing this.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
I prefer typing because I can post it on my I can post it on website and communicate with other fans to all get feedback from other friends to encourage myself to continue to finish my work.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中出现了语义混淆，学生提到“read a lot”而非“write a lot”，且表达不够自然，建议直接回答是否写作多，并简洁说明写作内容。
例: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy creating fan fiction based on popular movies like Harry Potter and The Social Network.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，句子未结束，建议完整表达喜欢写什么及原因，注意语法和句子完整性。
例: I like to write fan fiction based on famous movies because it allows me to explore new storylines and develop characters in my own way.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达重复且不够简洁，建议用更自然的表达说明自己写作内容不会改变，并避免重复。
例: No, I don't think the content I write will change because I have enjoyed writing fan fiction for five years and plan to keep doing it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅，建议简洁说明偏好打字的原因，并用连词使句子更连贯。
例: I prefer typing because it allows me to easily post my work online and communicate with other fans, which motivates me to keep writing.
文法
× As mentioned before, I like write a fan fictions based on famous movies because I want to create a.
✓ As mentioned before, I like writing fan fictions based on famous movies because I want to create a.
动词like后面应接动名词形式writing，而不是动词原形write。
× As mentioned before, I like write a fan fictions based on famous movies because I want to create a.
✓ As mentioned before, I like writing fan fictions based on famous movies because I want to create a.
名词fan fictions是复数形式，前面不应加不定冠词a。
× No, I don't think I'll change things to write because I've written fan fiction for five years and I really enjoyed it and I will continue to continue to writing this.
✓ No, I don't think I'll change the things I write because I've written fan fiction for five years and I really enjoy it and I will continue writing it.
动词continue后面应接动名词形式writing，而不是to writing。
× No, I don't think I'll change things to write because I've written fan fiction for five years and I really enjoyed it and I will continue to continue to writing this.
✓ No, I don't think I'll change the things I write because I've written fan fiction for five years and I really enjoy it and I will continue writing it.
动词enjoy后面应接动名词形式enjoy，而不是过去式enjoyed。
× I prefer typing because I can post it on my I can post it on website and communicate with other fans to all get feedback from other friends to encourage myself to continue to finish my work.
✓ I prefer typing because I can post it on my website and communicate with other fans to get feedback from them to encourage myself to continue finishing my work.
介词on后面应接具体名词website，且句子中重复表达应删除，to all get应改为to get，encourage myself后面接动词时应用动名词形式finishing。
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