Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“ride”应为“write”，“measuring applied linguistic”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构，避免重复和冗长。

例: Yes, I write a lot because I am studying applied linguistics. Most of my coursework involves writing essays, so I have to practice writing frequently. Additionally, I keep a diary to track my progress in my studies.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但语法和表达不够准确，如“in the day”应为“during the day”，“get a bad grade”时态不一致。建议注意时态和表达的准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: In my diary, I like to write about things that made me happy during the day as well as my biggest failures. For example, I once received a bad grade on my coursework because I didn't cooperate well with my team members.

提案: 回答中时态混乱，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议理清时态，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Absolutely. I believe the things I write will change as I grow. Currently, I focus more on academic topics like coursework, but after graduation, I expect to write more about my job and work experiences.

提案: 回答中出现拼写错误（pray应为prefer），句子未完成，表达不完整。建议注意拼写，完成句子，并保持表达简洁自然。

例: Actually, I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember what I write more effectively. I also enjoy the sound of the pen on paper, which is very satisfying, especially when I am doing creative writing like fiction.

× Both of my coursework is essay, so I need to write a lot.

✓ Both of my coursework are essays, so I need to write a lot.

coursework 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，但这里想表达多篇论文，应使用 essays 来指代多篇文章，且 both 指两个，后面应使用复数形式。

× I write to the Diaries to record my improvement in my study.

✓ I write in the diaries to record my improvement in my study.

write 后面接介词 in 表示在日记中写内容，不能用 to。

× For my Diaries, I always write what makes me happy in the day and my biggest failure in my life.

✓ For my diaries, I always write about what makes me happy during the day and my biggest failures in my life.

write 后面应加介词 about 来引出内容；in the day 应改为 during the day 更符合表达；failure 应用复数 failures 因为可能有多个失败。

× For example, I get a bad grade in my coursework and I don't cooperate with others well in my team.

✓ For example, I got a bad grade in my coursework and I didn't cooperate well with others in my team.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去时态。

× I think what I write down may change as a student now.

✓ I think what I write down may be changing as a student now.

表达现在正在发生的变化，使用现在进行时更合适。

× So I focused more.

✓ So I focus more.

前文说的是现在的情况，时态应保持一致，使用一般现在时。

× I focus more on the academic things like the coursework after I graduate and find a job.

✓ I focus more on academic things like coursework after I graduate and find a job.

academic things 前不需要冠词 the；coursework 是不可数名词，不用加 the。

× I think what I mentioned maybe more likely the job and the work.

✓ I think what I mentioned is more likely related to the job and work.

maybe 应改为 is more likely；the job 和 the work 前不需要冠词。

× Actually, I pray for handwriting to typing because it helps me remember what I write more effectively.

✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember what I write more effectively.

动词 prefer 后接名词短语时用 to，pray 是祈祷的意思，使用错误。

× Moreover, writing my hands allows me to.

✓ Moreover, writing by hand allows me to remember better.

原句结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。