Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了写作的好处，但语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me express my feelings easily. Also, I can write anywhere without worrying about the environment.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达有些重复和不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并避免重复表达。

例: I enjoy writing short stories and also recording events from my daily life because it's important to remember these moments.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议明确说明观点，使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

例: Yes, I think my writing changes over time because I like to explore different topics and styles.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，直接说明偏好并给出理由。

例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and I don't have to worry about paper or pens.

× Yes, I do, because I think that write writing can explore my feelings easily and I can write everywhere I shouldn't think about the environment.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think that writing can explore my feelings easily and I can write everywhere without thinking about the environment.

这里“write writing”中“write”是多余的，应直接使用动名词“writing”。另外，句子中“shouldn't think about the environment”表达不准确，改为“without thinking about the environment”更符合语境。动名词用法错误属于动词+ing形式错误。

× Yes, I do, because I think that write writing can explore my feelings easily and I can write everywhere I shouldn't think about the environment.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think that writing can explore my feelings easily and I can write everywhere without thinking about the environment.

句中“shouldn't think about the environment”表达不符合语境，正确表达应为“without thinking about the environment”，这里涉及介词使用错误。

× I like writing some short stories by myself and just like to write down what has happened on my own life.

✓ I like writing some short stories by myself and just like to write down what has happened in my own life.

介词“on”用错，描述生活经历应使用“in my own life”，这是代词搭配介词错误。

× I like writing some short stories by myself and just like to write down what has happened on my own life.

✓ I like writing some short stories by myself and just like to write down what has happened in my own life.

句中“some short stories”复数形式正确，无需改动。此处无复数错误。

× I don't like to write one thing in the range.

✓ I don't like to write the same thing repeatedly.

“one thing in the range”表达不清晰，改为“the same thing repeatedly”更符合表达习惯，属于量词使用不当。

× I don't like to write one thing in the range.

✓ I don't like to write the same thing repeatedly.

“in the range”用法不当，应改为更合适的表达方式，属于介词使用错误。

× I prefer typing because I shouldn't think about the paper, pens and so on.

✓ I prefer typing because I don't have to think about the paper, pens and so on.

“shouldn't”用法错误，表达不需要考虑时应使用“don't have to”，属于情态动词使用错误。

× Just like the environment I stand in.

✓ Just like the environment I am in.

“stand in”不符合语境，描述环境应使用“am in”，属于介词使用错误。