Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了时间上的变化，但句子结构有些复杂且存在语法错误，如“to handing”应为“to hand in”。建议简化句子结构，注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I don't write much during holidays because I'm on vacation. However, when I'm studying full-time, I usually have to write many essays for homework and exams.

提案: 回答中表达了个人喜好和原因，但“stubborn topic”用词不当，且句子不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇表达自己的感受，并丰富细节使回答更自然。

例: I prefer writing academic articles because I find it easier to focus on facts rather than imagination, which is not my strong suit.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子稍显冗长且表达不够自然。建议使用更简洁的句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I'm not sure, but I think my writing will stay mostly the same in the next few years because I will be attending university and focusing on academic work.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不自然的表达，如“way easier”、“my hand is headless”。建议使用正确的表达方式，避免口语化过强的词汇，并注意句子结构。

例: I prefer typing because it's more convenient and faster. Features like auto-correct and auto-fill help me write more efficiently than handwriting.

× I typically have to write a large amount of essays to handing as homework or exams.

✓ I typically have to write a large number of essays to hand in as homework or exams.

这里“a large amount of essays”中的“amount”用于不可数名词，而“essays”是可数名词，应该用“a large number of”。另外，“to handing”应为“to hand in”，表示“提交”。

× I typically have to write a large amount of essays to handing as homework or exams.

✓ I typically have to write a large number of essays to hand in as homework or exams.

“to handing”中的“handing”不符合动词不定式结构，正确用法是“to hand in”，表示“提交”。

× I enjoy writing academic articles more because I'm not an imaginative person, so it's quite a stubborn topic for me personally.

✓ I enjoy writing academic articles more because I'm not an imaginative person, so it's quite a difficult topic for me personally.

“stubborn”通常用来形容人固执，不适合用来形容“topic”，应使用“difficult”表示“难以应对的”。

× I'm pretty certain it would remain stable throughout the upcoming few years as I would be attending university and focusing highly on academic content.

✓ I'm pretty certain it will remain stable throughout the upcoming few years as I will be attending university and focusing highly on academic content.

这里表达对未来的确定性，应该用“will”而非“would”，因为“would”表示假设或不确定。

× I also type faster the handwriting so my hand is headless.

✓ I also type faster than handwriting so my hand is helpless.

“faster the handwriting”缺少比较级的介词“than”，应为“faster than handwriting”。“headless”意思是“无头的”，应为“helpless”表示“无力的”。