Writing— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you write a lot?
受験者
Yes, I like writing a lot. I like writing poetries, quotes, and short stories. I am fond of writing. I believe I can express myself better through writing rather than to the conversation.
試験官
What do you like to write? Why?
受験者
I like to write romantic poems. I feel connected to poems while I write. I feel like I am in heaven. I forget all my worries and stress. I can express myself better to writing. That's why I like writing.
試験官
Do you think the things you write would change?
受験者
I think the things I write would change because we know Fridays change with time, things change with time and we evolve through time, so I think it will change.
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
受験者
When I'm writing, I prefer handwriting rather than typing because I feel connected and I can romanticize my life through writing. On paper though my handwriting is not that good, but I prefer handwriting rather than typing anytime.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
スコア: 75.0提案: तपाईंको उत्तर राम्रो छ तर 'poetries' को सट्टा 'poems' प्रयोग गर्नु राम्रो हुन्छ किनभने 'poetries' सामान्यतया प्रयोग हुँदैन। साथै, केही वाक्यहरू दोहोरिएको जस्तो छ, त्यसैले अलि संक्षिप्त र प्रभावकारी बनाउनुहोस्।
例: Yes, I enjoy writing a lot, especially poems, quotes, and short stories. I find writing helps me express my thoughts better than speaking.
What do you like to write? Why?
スコア: 80.0提案: तपाईंको उत्तर भावनात्मक छ तर 'I can express myself better to writing' लाई 'through writing' मा सुधार गर्नुपर्छ। साथै, केही वाक्यहरूलाई जोड्न लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस् जसले उत्तरलाई अझ प्रवाहमय बनाउँछ।
例: I like to write romantic poems because when I do, I feel connected and as if I am in heaven. Moreover, I forget all my worries and stress, so I can express myself better through writing.
Do you think the things you write would change?
スコア: 65.0提案: यहाँ 'Fridays' को प्रयोग सान्दर्भिक छैन र वाक्य अलि अस्पष्ट छ। तपाईंले स्पष्ट र सान्दर्भिक उदाहरणहरू प्रयोग गर्नु पर्छ। साथै, वाक्य संरचना सुधार गर्न लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।
例: I believe the things I write will change over time because as we grow and experience new things, our thoughts and feelings evolve, which influences our writing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
スコア: 78.0提案: तपाईंको उत्तर स्पष्ट छ तर 'romanticize my life through writing' अलि अस्पष्ट छ। यसलाई स्पष्ट बनाउन सक्नुहुन्छ र वाक्यहरूलाई जोड्न लिंकिंग शब्दहरू प्रयोग गर्नुहोस्।
例: I prefer handwriting over typing because it helps me feel more connected to my thoughts. Although my handwriting is not perfect, writing by hand allows me to express my feelings more personally.
文法
× I like writing poetries, quotes, and short stories.
✓ I like writing poetry, quotes, and short stories.
The word 'poetry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'poetries' is incorrect. Use 'poetry' to refer to the art or collection of poems.
× I believe I can express myself better through writing rather than to the conversation.
✓ I believe I can express myself better through writing rather than through conversation.
The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'rather than' in this context. The correct preposition is 'through' to match the phrase 'through writing'. Also, 'conversation' does not need 'the' here as it is used in a general sense.
× I can express myself better to writing.
✓ I can express myself better through writing.
The preposition 'to' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to use with 'express myself better' in this context is 'through'.
× I think the things I write would change because we know Fridays change with time, things change with time and we evolve through time, so I think it will change.
✓ I think the things I write would change because we know things change with time, and we evolve through time, so I think they will change.
The word 'Fridays' is incorrectly used here; it seems to be a typo or incorrect pronoun. It should be 'things' to maintain meaning and agreement. Also, 'it will change' should be 'they will change' to agree with the plural subject 'things'.
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