Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“becauses”应为“because”，“admiring others works”应为“admiring others' works”。建议你注意语法的正确性，并且简洁明了地回答问题，避免冗余。

例: I don't write a lot because my reading skills in both Chinese and English are not very strong. However, I enjoy admiring others' works and reading books, novels, and stories.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“dividing my own creativity”应为“expressing my own creativity”，且“interest on Carol”不明确。建议你使用更准确的词汇，并且逻辑清晰地表达原因。

例: If I have to write something, I prefer writing stories because it allows me to express my creativity and develop interesting characters. Writing stories also helps me stay engaged and improve my imagination.

提案: 回答中时态使用不当，如“like to write stories when I was young”应为“liked to write stories when I was young”，且表达不够连贯。建议你注意时态一致性，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I don't think my writing preferences will change in the future. I liked writing stories when I was young, and I still enjoy it now because it allows me to express my experiences, creativity, and imagination.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“hand drives him”应为“handwriting”，且表达不够自然。建议你使用正确词汇，并简洁明了地表达你的偏好和原因。

例: I prefer handwriting because I have been writing by hand since I was young, so I am used to it. Also, typing feels uncomfortable and slower for me compared to handwriting.

× Well for me I'm not really into writing becauses my reading skills is not so good either in Chinese or English, but I really like to admiring others works and I really like to read books, novels and stories.

✓ Well for me I'm not really into writing because my reading skills are not so good either in Chinese or English, but I really like admiring others' works and I really like to read books, novels and stories.

这里'skills'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。此外，'admiring'应改为动词原形'admiring'前面加动词like后用动词-ing形式是正确的，但原句中多了to，应去掉to。'others works'应为'others' works'，表示别人的作品，需加所有格。

× Well for me I'm not really into writing becauses my reading skills is not so good either in Chinese or English, but I really like to admiring others works and I really like to read books, novels and stories.

✓ Well for me I'm not really into writing because my reading skills are not so good either in Chinese or English, but I really like admiring others' works and I really like to read books, novels and stories.

动词like后面接动词时，通常用动词-ing形式或不定式，但不能同时用to和-ing。原句中'like to admiring'是不正确的，应改为'like admiring'。

× Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that's writing stories can actually dividing my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

✓ Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that writing stories can actually divide my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

动词'dividing'应为动词原形'divide'，因为前面有情态动词'can'，情态动词后应接动词原形。

× Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that's writing stories can actually dividing my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

✓ Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that writing stories can actually divide my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

情态动词后应接动词原形，不能用动词-ing形式。

× Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that's writing stories can actually dividing my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

✓ Well, for me, if I have to write something, I want to choose to write stories 'cause I believe that writing stories can actually divide my own creativity and also read my interest in the characters.

原句中'that's'应为'that'，因为这里是连接词引导宾语从句，而不是缩写形式。

× At the same time, I believe that writing stories can enhance my interest on Carol.

✓ At the same time, I believe that writing stories can enhance my interest in Carol.

动词'enhance'后应接介词'in'表示对某事物的兴趣，'interest on'是不正确的搭配。

× Uhm, I like to write stories when I was young and I love to do it now and it's a great way to express my experience, creativity and imagination.

✓ Uhm, I liked to write stories when I was young and I love to do it now and it's a great way to express my experience, creativity and imagination.

描述过去的习惯动作时，动词应使用过去式，'like'应改为'liked'。

× And I still allowed to write stories that have happened to.

✓ And I am still allowed to write stories that have happened to me.

缺少助动词'am'，且'that have happened to'后应加宾语代词'me'，表示故事发生在我身上。

× Well, for me, yeah, I prefer to hand drives him because I have been writing things by my hand since I'm young, so I'm used to it and it's actually not feeling very good for me to type in words.

✓ Well, for me, yeah, I prefer handwriting because I have been writing things by hand since I was young, so I'm used to it and it actually doesn't feel very good for me to type words.

'hand drives him'是错误表达，应为'handwriting'。'by my hand'应为'by hand'。'since I'm young'应为'since I was young'。'it's actually not feeling very good for me to type in words'应改为'it actually doesn't feel very good for me to type words'。

× Well, for me, yeah, I prefer to hand drives him because I have been writing things by my hand since I'm young, so I'm used to it and it's actually not feeling very good for me to type in words.

✓ Well, for me, yeah, I prefer handwriting because I have been writing things by hand since I was young, so I'm used to it and it actually doesn't feel very good for me to type words.

'since I'm young'中'I'm'应为过去时态'was'，因为表示从过去某时开始持续到现在的动作。

× Plus I believe that typing is very slow for me compared to handwriting.

✓ Plus I believe that typing is much slower for me compared to handwriting.

形容词'slow'应使用比较级'slower'，以符合比较结构。