Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some incomplete sentences, which affects naturalness and coherence. Try to give a clear, direct response with complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, avoid unclear words like 'Angai' that may confuse the listener.

例: I don't write as much as I used to because AI tools like ChatGPT make writing easier. However, I still practice writing regularly to improve my skills.

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit fragmented with short sentences. Try to combine your ideas into coherent sentences using linking words to improve fluency and coherence.

例: I like to write persuasive emails and essays because I enjoy presenting an argument and supporting it with several reasons to convince others.

提案: Good use of contrasting ideas and clear explanation. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking phrases to make your answer more engaging.

例: Whether my writing changes depends on the topic. For example, my views on morality or ethics tend to remain stable, but when I write about technology, which evolves rapidly, my opinions often change within months.

提案: Your answer is relevant but somewhat repetitive and contains incomplete sentences. Try to combine your points into complete, fluent sentences and avoid redundancy.

例: I prefer typing because it allows me to easily edit and correct mistakes. Additionally, saving documents electronically ensures I don't lose my work.

× Because of AI, it's becoming easier and easier to construct. Writing with just a few words, Angai.

✓ Because of AI, it's becoming easier and easier to construct writing with just a few words, Angai.

The original sentence incorrectly separates 'construct' and 'writing' into two sentences, which disrupts the intended meaning. Combining them into one sentence with 'construct writing' correctly uses the verb + -ing form to express the action.

× Or persuasive essays.

✓ I prefer to write persuasive essays.

The sentence fragment 'Or persuasive essays.' lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete. It should be combined with the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete sentence.

× Where I take an argument or an idea.

✓ In these, I take an argument or an idea.

The original sentence is a fragment and does not stand alone as a complete sentence. It should be connected to the previous sentence or rephrased to form a complete thought.

× And I break it down into several reasons why this idea should be implemented.

✓ I break it down into several reasons why this idea should be implemented.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be considered a sentence fragment. Removing 'And' creates a complete and formal sentence.

× It also makes it very easy to go back and rewrite what you if you have made mistakes.

✓ It also makes it very easy to go back and rewrite what you wrote if you have made mistakes.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'wrote' after 'what you', which is necessary to complete the meaning. Adding 'wrote' correctly uses the past participle form to indicate the action being rewritten.

× Electronically so this way.

✓ Electronically, so this way,

The phrase 'Electronically so this way.' is a sentence fragment and unclear. Adding commas and connecting it properly to the previous sentence improves clarity and sentence structure.