Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“rise”应为“write”，“published the online”应为“published online”。建议注意动词时态和介词的正确使用，同时避免冗余表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy writing and consider myself an amateur writer. I often write short stories inspired by my daily life and publish them online, where I have gained quite a few followers.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，如“exploring the in. Emotions”不通顺，且缺少连接词。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意动词形式和时态。

例: I like to write romantic novels because I enjoy exploring the emotions and relationships between characters. Writing love stories allows me to create beautiful and touching moments that readers can relate to.

提案: 回答中有多处拼写错误和语法错误，如“arise well”应为“I write will”，“overtime”应为“over time”，“involve influence”表达不清。建议加强语法和拼写的准确性，并使用更清晰的表达。

例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. As I grow older, my perspective and experiences will influence my writing style and topics. Additionally, technological advancements might change the way I write.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法错误，如“becauses”应为“because”，“added eight”不明确，且句子不完整。建议注意拼写和句子完整性，使用清晰的表达和连接词。

例: I prefer typing because it is much faster than handwriting. In fact, typing allows me to quickly edit and publish my work online, which is very convenient. On the other hand, handwriting can be slow and less efficient, especially when I need to write a lot.

× I often rise short stories which inspired by my daily life and published the online where I have gained quite a few followers.

✓ I often write short stories which are inspired by my daily life and published online where I have gained quite a few followers.

这里的 'rise' 应为 'write'，且 'short stories' 是复数，动词要与之匹配。'published the online' 中的 'the' 是多余的，应去掉。

× I often rise short stories which inspired by my daily life and published the online where I have gained quite a few followers.

✓ I often write short stories which are inspired by my daily life and published online where I have gained quite a few followers.

'inspired' 和 'published' 在这里作过去分词，表示被动语态，需加助动词 'are' 来构成被动语态。

× I like to write romantic novels because I enjoy exploring the in.

✓ I like to write romantic novels because I enjoy exploring them.

句中 'the in' 无意义，应改为指代前文的 'romantic novels' 的代词 'them'。

× Emotions and the relationships between characters writing about love story allow me to create beautiful and touching moments that readers can related to.

✓ Emotions and the relationships between characters in writing about love stories allow me to create beautiful and touching moments that readers can relate to.

'writing about love story' 应为 'in writing about love stories'，'love story' 应为复数 'love stories'，'related' 应为动词原形 'relate'。

× Emotions and the relationships between characters writing about love story allow me to create beautiful and touching moments that readers can related to.

✓ Emotions and the relationships between characters in writing about love stories allow me to create beautiful and touching moments that readers can relate to.

'writing' 这里应作为介词短语 'in writing'，表示方式。

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

'would' 用于假设语气，这里应使用一般将来时 'will'，但此处主要是时态问题。

× Yes, I believe the things arise well change overtime.

✓ Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time.

'arise well' 是错误表达，应为 'I write'，'would' 改为 'will' 表示将来时，'overtime' 应为 'over time'。

× As I grow older, my perspective and experience will involve influence my writing style and topic.

✓ As I grow older, my perspective and experience will involve influencing my writing style and topics.

'involve' 后应接动名词 'influencing'，'topic' 应为复数 'topics'。

× Additionally, tecnological advancements might change the way I rights.

✓ Additionally, technological advancements might change the way I write.

'rights' 是名词，正确动词形式应为 'write'，'tecnological' 拼写错误，应为 'technological'。

× I prefer typing becauses it is much faster to handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing because it is much faster than handwriting.

'to handwriting' 应改为 'than handwriting'，表示比较。

× In fact, typing allow me to quickly added eight and publish my work online which is very convenient.

✓ In fact, typing allows me to quickly add edits and publish my work online which is very convenient.

主语 'typing' 是第三人称单数，动词应为 'allows'，'added eight' 应为 'add edits'。

× On the other hand, hind handwriting can be slow and less infections.

✓ On the other hand, handwriting can be slow and less efficient.

'hind handwriting' 拼写错误，应为 'handwriting'，'less infections' 应为 'less efficient'。