Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to give a clear and confident answer without hesitation. Avoid filler words like 'I guess' to sound more natural and effective. For example, simply say 'Yes, I write quite often.'

例: Yes, I write quite often because I enjoy expressing my thoughts on paper.

提案: In English (Cambodia), avoid informal phrases like 'I'm so lazy' and unclear words like 'ride'. Also, try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'I don't usually like writing because it feels difficult, but I do it when required for school because I want to get good grades.'

例: I don't usually like writing because it feels difficult, but I do it when required for school because I want to get good grades.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to give a more thoughtful and complete answer instead of repeating 'I don't know'. You can express uncertainty but add your opinion or prediction. For example, 'I'm not sure, but I think my writing style might improve as I practice more.'

例: I'm not sure, but I think my writing style might improve as I practice more.

提案: In English (Cambodia), avoid unclear or incorrect phrases like 'typing it's not lazy'. Use clear reasons and linking words to explain your preference. For example, 'I prefer typing because it is faster and easier than handwriting.'

例: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier than handwriting.

× But when the teacher give me a writing, yeah, I like to ride 'cause I need a score.

✓ But when the teacher gives me a writing, yeah, I like to write 'cause I need a score.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher'. Also, 'ride' is a typo and should be corrected to 'write' to match the context.

× Because typing it's not lazy like writing because it's easy to type then, right?

✓ Because typing is not lazy like writing because it's easier to type, right?

The phrase 'typing it's not lazy' is incorrect; it should be 'typing is not lazy'. Also, 'easy to type then' is awkward; 'easier to type' is more appropriate to compare typing and writing.