Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai (ví dụ: 'right' thay vì 'write'). Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I write a lot, especially when I attend school and do exercises. I believe writing helps me remember knowledge better and understand lectures more effectively.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các câu với nhau để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I like to write notes related to my lectures at university because it helps me remember the material better. Writing is an interesting method that I enjoy using for studying.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách logic hơn.

例: No, I don't think what I write will change in the future because I write to express my thoughts and to help myself understand and memorize information easily.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer handwriting because as a university student, writing by hand helps me understand lectures better and remember information for a longer time.

× Yes I do, I write a lot, I right when I go to school, when I do my exercise and I think why is the best way to impress my knowledge and I can understand all lecture.

✓ Yes I do, I write a lot, I write when I go to school, when I do my exercise and I think it is the best way to improve my knowledge and I can understand all lectures.

The word 'right' is a misspelling of 'write', which is a verb. Also, 'why is the best way' is incorrect; it should be 'it is the best way' to form a proper clause. 'Impress my knowledge' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'improve my knowledge'. 'Lecture' should be plural 'lectures' to match the context. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, I like to write a thing related to my lecture in their school. I think is is the best way I can impress and remember things as study here at my university. So is a very interesting an I love the right way.

✓ Well, I like to write things related to my lectures at my school. I think it is the best way I can improve and remember things as I study here at my university. So it is very interesting and I love this way.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used; it should be 'my' to refer to the speaker's school. 'A thing' is better as 'things' to match plural context. 'Is is' is a repetition error; it should be 'it is'. 'Impress' is incorrect here; 'improve' fits better. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Right way' should be 'this way' for clarity. These changes correct pronoun misuse and improve sentence coherence.

× Wow no I don't exactly I don't care about things will change in the future or north because I righty impressed my thoughts and I want to write to understand an I think easy memorized too yes.

✓ Wow no, I don't exactly know. I don't care if things will change in the future or not because I write to express my thoughts and I want to write to understand and I think it is easy to memorize too, yes.

The sentence lacks modal verbs and proper conjunctions. 'Don't exactly' is incomplete; 'don't exactly know' is correct. 'Will change' needs 'if' to introduce the clause. 'North' is a typo for 'not'. 'Righty impressed' is incorrect; 'write to express' is correct. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Easy memorized' should be 'easy to memorize'. These corrections fix modal verb usage and sentence clarity.

× I think I prefer handwriting because I'm a student at the university, so I think writing my my hands he or traditional ways to understand all Fletcher and I can remember longer.

✓ I think I prefer handwriting because I'm a student at the university, so I think writing by hand or traditional ways help me understand all lectures and I can remember longer.

The phrase 'writing my my hands he' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'writing by hand'. 'Fletcher' is a misspelling of 'lectures'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'help me' to clarify the effect of handwriting. These corrections fix pronoun misuse and improve sentence clarity.