Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks grammatical accuracy and clarity. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add a supporting detail using linking words.

例: No, I don't write a lot nowadays. When I was a child, I used to write a lot for my homework, but now I mostly jot down notes on my phone to remember important things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your sentences. Also, be specific about what you write and why.

例: I like to write important notes related to my work or motivational quotes. These writings help me stay focused and remember key tasks for a long time.

提案: Your answer is very unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a direct response to the question with clear and simple sentences. Use linking words to explain your ideas logically.

例: Yes, the things I write can change depending on my needs or goals. Sometimes I write reminders, and other times I write ideas or plans.

提案: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to organize your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

例: I prefer both typing and handwriting. If I have my mobile phone, I type notes, but if I have a notebook, I write by hand. It depends on the situation and what is more convenient for me.

× No, I'm not kind of writer.

✓ No, I'm not the kind of writer.

The phrase 'not kind of writer' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'kind'. The correct expression is 'not the kind of writer' to specify a particular type or category.

× When I was a child, I write a lot to do some homework.

✓ When I was a child, I wrote a lot to do some homework.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb 'write' should be in the past tense 'wrote' to maintain tense consistency.

× More recently, when I grow up, I didn't write anything.

✓ More recently, since I grew up, I haven't written anything.

The phrase 'when I grow up' is incorrect for recent past; it should be 'since I grew up' to indicate a time from past to present. Also, 'didn't write' should be 'haven't written' to express an action continuing up to now.

× I just note down in my phone what I need. What do I do so.

✓ I just note down on my phone what I need. That's what I do.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to writing on a phone. The second sentence 'What do I do so.' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'That's what I do.' for clarity.

× I like to write something important which I will going to be remember for my work or for me to motivate switch.

✓ I like to write something important which I will remember for my work or to motivate myself.

The phrase 'will going to be remember' is incorrect; it should be 'will remember'. Also, 'for me to motivate switch' is unclear and should be 'to motivate myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun.

× I always right on those kind of things an some kind of notes I have which I will help me for long time.

✓ I always write on those kinds of things and some notes I have which will help me for a long time.

The word 'right' is a homophone error; it should be 'write'. 'Those kind of things' should be pluralized to 'those kinds of things'. 'An' should be 'and'. 'I will help me' is incorrect; it should be 'which will help me'. Also, 'for long time' needs the article 'a'.

× This kind of thing I'll write down.

✓ This kind of thing I write down.

The future tense 'I'll write down' is unnecessary here; the present tense 'I write down' fits better to express habitual action.

× Is it it would Sainz sometime where it's not something it's depending on the on the what I'm writing or what I want.

✓ Sometimes it depends on what I'm writing or what I want.

The original sentence is unclear and contains redundant words. Simplifying it to 'Sometimes it depends on what I'm writing or what I want' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I write any kind of things Who is I will allow I will allow my same man who is I don't.

✓ I write any kind of things that I want; I allow myself to do so.

The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect pronouns and structure. Rewriting it with correct pronouns and clearer structure improves understanding.

× I prefer both. We never have my mobile phones. I write down there.

✓ I prefer both. Whenever I have my mobile phone, I write down there.

'We never have my mobile phones' is incorrect; it should be 'Whenever I have my mobile phone' to indicate the condition. Also, 'phones' should be singular to match 'my'.

× I know if I am, I have a notebook I'll write down there.

✓ I know if I have a notebook, I'll write down there.

The phrase 'if I am' is incorrect and unnecessary. The correct conditional is 'if I have a notebook'.

× So it's depending on the situation and what I have with myself. That's kind of thing. Help me to do. Something right?

✓ So it depends on the situation and what I have with me. That kind of thing helps me to do something, right?

'It's depending' should be 'it depends' for correct verb form. 'What I have with myself' should be 'what I have with me'. The sentences are fragmented and need to be combined for clarity and grammatical correctness.