Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: To be honest, I rarely write on paper these days, but I often write documents on the computer for my work.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不清晰，且内容重复。建议明确表达喜欢写什么，并给出具体原因，避免无关词汇。

例: I usually write work-related documents because it's part of my job, although I don't particularly enjoy writing in general.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和发音错误，表达不连贯。建议先确认问题含义，然后用清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词。

例: I'm not sure I understand the question, but I think the things I write will change because my work content might change in the future.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，使用恰当的词汇。

例: I prefer typing on my smartphone because with technological advances, I've become accustomed to using it, so it's more convenient for me.

× I almost don't write on paper for long time

✓ I almost don't write on paper for a long time

这里缺少冠词“a”，表示“一段时间”，应使用“a long time”。

× I write some document on the computer a lot for my work

✓ I write some documents on the computer a lot for my work

“document”应为复数形式“documents”，因为表示多份文件。

× I don't enjoying writing some things like thyroid

✓ I don't enjoy writing some things like thyroid

“don't”后应接动词原形，不能用动名词“enjoying”。

× the most frequent since I write is document for my work

✓ the most frequent thing I write is documents for my work

“document”应为复数“documents”，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× the reason why is there this is my work requirements

✓ the reason is that these are my work requirements

“there is”用法错误，应改为“the reason is that”，且“requirements”应为复数。

× Actually I don't watch you mean

✓ Actually I don't know what you mean

“watch”用错，应为“know”，且“what”引导宾语从句。

× I the things I write hood change

✓ I think the things I write would change

“hood”应为“would”，且“think”缺失。

× the continent of my work would be would change

✓ the content of my work would change

“continent”拼写错误，应为“content”，且“would be would”重复，应删去多余部分。

× I would write different things from in the future

✓ I would write different things in the future

“from”多余，应去掉。

× Be 'cause with the development of tech knowledge I have got into a habit of using the mobile phones

✓ Because with the development of technology, I have got into the habit of using mobile phones

“Be 'cause”应为“Because”，且“tech knowledge”应改为“technology”，“a habit”前加定冠词“the”，且“the mobile phones”应去掉定冠词。

× so it's family here for me to type type

✓ so it's familiar for me to type

“family here”拼写错误，应为“familiar”，且“type”重复，应去掉多余部分。