Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句和拼写错误，同时注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

例: No, I don't write a lot, but I want to improve. For example, during my happy times, I like to write something to express my emotions and feelings. I think writing is a good habit to express creativity and feelings.

提案: 回答内容较简单且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并详细说明原因，避免使用不明词汇，增强表达的逻辑性和具体性。

例: I like to write about my daily routine. For example, I write my shopping list and work tasks in advance. Doing this helps me stay organized and efficient.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清楚，建议练习用简单句表达观点，并用具体例子说明变化的原因，使回答更连贯易懂。

例: Yes, I think the things I write can change because sometimes unexpected events happen. For example, my work schedule might change, so I have to update my plans.

提案: 回答中有大量语法和词汇错误，表达不连贯，建议学习正确表达偏好并说明原因，使用简单清晰的句子。

例: I prefer handwriting because I like traditional Chinese characters. Writing by hand helps me express my emotions and makes my handwriting beautiful.

× No, I don't write aloud, but I want to. Improve.

✓ No, I don't write aloud, but I want to improve.

句子结构错误，'want to'后面缺少动词，应该连写成'want to improve'，表示想要改进。

× For example, during my.

✓ For example, during my free time.

句子不完整，缺少名词，'during my'后面应接名词，如'free time'，表示在我的空闲时间。

× I happy time along to write something to express my emotions and feelings.

✓ I am happy to write something to express my emotions and feelings.

形容词用法错误，'I happy time along to write'不通顺，应改为'I am happy to write'，表达我很高兴写东西。

× I think writing is good habit and to express your creativity and fillings.

✓ I think writing is a good habit and helps to express your creativity and feelings.

量词使用错误，'good habit'前应加不定冠词'a'，且'fillings'拼写错误，应为'feelings'。

× I like to write my daily routine.

✓ I like to write about my daily routine.

介词使用错误，'write my daily routine'应改为'write about my daily routine'，表示写关于日常生活。

× For example, I will write my shopping list and work list before eyes.

✓ For example, I will write my shopping list and work list beforehand.

句子结构错误，'before eyes'不合适，应改为'beforehand'，表示提前写。

× Doing 88 make me.

✓ Doing these makes me organized and efficient.

句子不完整且缺主语，'Doing 88 make me'不通顺，应补充完整，'Doing these makes me organized and efficient'。

× Yes, I think the things I write would be changed.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write would change.

代词使用错误，'would be changed'被动语态不合适，应改为主动语态'would change'。

× Is no more is known more for us to accept the things happened beyond I planned for example, might ask my work test has changed during my.

✓ There is more unknown for us to accept the things that happened beyond what I planned. For example, my work schedule might have changed during that time.

代词和句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，需重组句子使其通顺。

× Or time.

✓ Or time changes.

句子不完整，缺少谓语，需补充完整。

× I pray for writing.

✓ I prefer writing.

代词和词汇使用错误，'pray for writing'应为'I prefer writing'，表示我更喜欢写作。

× Be 'cause.

✓ Because

连词拼写错误，'Be 'cause'应为'Because'。

× This joke of characters is breast my emotions and volumes and it can make.

✓ This style of characters expresses my emotions and feelings, and it can make

形容词和词汇使用错误，'joke'应为'style'，'breast'应为'express'，句子不完整需修正。

× My handwriting model. Beautiful.

✓ My handwriting looks beautiful.

句子结构错误，缺少谓语，需合并为完整句子。