Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh hỏi lại người kiểm tra. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về việc bạn viết gì và tại sao.

例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially during school hours because I need to take notes and complete assignments.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm. Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích viết truyện tranh với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: I enjoy writing comics because it helps me relax and express my creativity in a simple and fun way.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về việc bạn có thể chỉnh sửa bài viết của mình.

例: Yes, I believe what I write can be changed because I can always delete mistakes and rewrite to improve my work.

提案: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tránh lỗi phát âm, ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích viết tay hơn, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I prefer handwriting because it is more convenient for me to write notes on paper, and it helps me control my hand movements better, reducing any discomfort.

× I do often write a lot, especially when I go to school.

✓ I often write a lot, especially when I go to school.

The adverb 'often' should be placed before the main verb 'write' rather than after the auxiliary 'do' for correct adverb placement in English.

× Like write the content if what I like because this can. Reduce my Strat san.

✓ I like to write content about what I like because this can reduce my stress.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun usage and unclear phrasing. 'If' should be 'of', and 'Strat san' seems to be a mishearing of 'stress'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I like it just. Simple, I like it.

✓ I just like it simple.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. Combining into a single, clear sentence improves structure and meaning.

× Yes, of course they think I cry can be changed because.

✓ Yes, of course I think it can be changed because.

Incorrect pronouns 'they' and 'I cry' are used. Correct pronouns 'I' and 'it' are needed to refer properly to the subject and object.

× We can. Delete it and create it again. If is. Phil or wrong?

✓ We can delete it and create it again if it is filled or wrong.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and words. 'If is Phil or wrong' is unclear; corrected to 'if it is filled or wrong' for clarity.

× Honestly, I prefer handwriting when I'm writing because this is more convenient to me to write on the note or on the paper.

✓ Honestly, I prefer handwriting when I'm writing because it is more convenient for me to write on a notebook or on paper.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'convenient'; it should be 'for'. Also, 'the note' is better as 'a notebook' or 'notes' for natural expression.

× In is this. Easier to control the. Pain when I right by my house.

✓ It is easier to control the pen when I write by my house.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'In is this' should be 'It is', 'Pain' is a mishearing of 'pen', and 'right' should be 'write'. Correct prepositions and words improve clarity.