Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

例: No, I don't write a lot. I prefer speaking or typing when I want to communicate, so I mostly text or type messages.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích rõ sở thích và lý do, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I like to write about football biographies because I am a big football fan. I enjoy researching my favorite players and writing about their lives.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích quan điểm của mình một cách rõ ràng và có cấu trúc, tránh nói lắp và dùng từ không phù hợp.

例: At the moment, I don't think the things I write will change. I usually write about popular biographies, which are different from the essays I write at school.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: In my opinion, typing is the best choice for me because it takes less time and is easier compared to handwriting.

× I'm good shows speaking or typing.

✓ I'm good at showing, speaking, or typing.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'shows' instead of the gerund form 'showing' after 'good at'. After 'good at', verbs should be in the '-ing' form to indicate ability or skill. The corrected sentence uses 'showing' to properly express the skill.

× When I want to communicate.

✓ When I want to communicate,

The original sentence is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause. It should be connected to the following sentence or completed to form a full sentence. Adding a comma indicates continuation.

× So I mostly texting or typing.

✓ So I mostly text or type.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the gerund forms 'texting' and 'typing' without auxiliary verbs. The correct form uses the base verbs 'text' and 'type' after 'mostly' to indicate habitual actions.

× When I want to talk.

✓ When I want to talk,

Similar to a previous fragment, this is an incomplete sentence and should be connected to the next clause or completed. Adding a comma indicates continuation.

× I thought it it just thing to write about.

✓ I thought it was just a thing to write about.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'was' to complete the thought and has a repeated word 'it'. Also, 'a' is needed before 'thing' as it is a singular countable noun.

× Football Love Biography.

✓ Football, love, biography.

This phrase lacks proper punctuation and conjunctions to list items clearly. Adding commas separates the items.

× Because I am the.

✓ Because I am a

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. It should be completed with a noun or phrase to make sense.

× Football lover.

✓ football lover.

This fragment should be connected to the previous sentence or made into a complete sentence. Also, 'football' should be lowercase unless at the start of a sentence.

× So I just say search up the information of my favorite players and start writing writing it.

✓ So I just search for information about my favorite players and start writing it.

The original sentence has redundant words ('say search up'), incorrect preposition ('search up' should be 'search for'), and repeated 'writing'. The correction removes redundancy and uses correct prepositions.

× At the moment I think the answer is no. Aye. Fight that.

✓ At the moment, I think the answer is no. I might fight that.

The original sentence has unclear words 'Aye. Fight that.' which seem to be misheard or mistyped. Assuming the intended meaning involves a modal verb 'might' to express possibility, the correction clarifies this.

× When I write. Popular Biography.

✓ When I write popular biographies,

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly capitalizes 'Popular Biography'. It should be a continuous phrase with proper capitalization and punctuation.

× I never. Your name.

✓ I never use your name.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete. Adding 'use' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Sleepy compared to the things that I write in school, it just.

✓ It's sleepy compared to the things that I write in school.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'It's' at the start and removing the trailing 'it just' completes the sentence.

× In my opinion. Typing is the best choice for me.

✓ In my opinion, typing is the best choice for me.

The original sentence incorrectly uses a period instead of a comma, causing a sentence fragment. Using a comma connects the introductory phrase to the main clause.

× I mean it takes less time to. Communicate an is more easier. Compared to writing.

✓ I mean it takes less time to communicate and is easier compared to writing.

The original sentence has incorrect punctuation and uses 'more easier', which is redundant. 'Easier' is the correct comparative form without 'more'. Also, 'an' is a typo for 'and'.