Writing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议多练习简单句型，确保表达准确。回答时应直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I write quite often, especially when I need to send birthday cards or letters to my parents and friends.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达写作内容和原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I like to write about touching memories. For example, on Mother's Day, I write a heartfelt letter to my mother to thank her for taking care of me.

提案: 回答不够明确且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并解释原因。

例: I don't think what I write will change because I always write the truth, and my words will remain the same.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误。建议明确表达偏好，使用连贯句子说明原因。

例: I prefer handwriting when writing letters or cards to my friends because I think handwritten notes are more personal and meaningful.

× I straley write something.

✓ I rarely write anything.

这里'straley'是拼写错误，应为'rarely'。'something'在否定句中通常用'anything'，表示否定含义。

× I just write some pepper like.

✓ I just write some paper-like things.

'pepper like'应为'paper-like'，表示类似纸的东西。这里是拼写错误和词语搭配错误。

× Today I need to get a letter or a card for my. Parents or friends birthday.

✓ Today I need to get a letter or a card for my parents' or friends' birthday.

句子中断句错误，'my.'后不应断句，且'parents'和'friends'应为复数所有格，表示生日属于他们。

× I like to write some touching memories.

✓ I like to write some touching memories.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× For example. A Mother's Day I write a letter to my eye red cards for my mother and say I'm very thanks to her.

✓ For example, on Mother's Day, I write a letter or red cards to my mother and say I'm very thankful to her.

句子断句错误，'For example.'应与后文连贯。'eye red cards'应为'or red cards'，表达写信或红色贺卡。'thanks'应为'thankful'，形容词形式。

× Take caring.

✓ Take care.

'Take caring'是错误表达，正确为'Take care'，表示保重。

× I don't think the things I write would change.

✓ I don't think the things I write will change.

表达未来可能性时，'will'比'would'更合适，表示对未来的预测。

× Because I think. That is low true thing I write on it.

✓ Because I think that is a true thing I write about.

句子断句错误，'Because I think.'不应断句。'low true'应为'a true'，表达真实的事情。'write on it'应为'write about'，表示写关于某事。

× And don't be disappear.

✓ And it won't disappear.

'don't be disappear'语法错误，应为'won't disappear'，表示将来不会消失。

× I prefer handwriting with at.

✓ I prefer handwriting.

'handwriting with at'是不正确的搭配，直接说'I prefer handwriting'即可。

× Write some letter or card to my friends because I think her writing is.

✓ I write some letters or cards to my friends because I think handwriting is

句子结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语。'some letter'应为'letters'，复数形式。'her writing'应为'handwriting'，更符合语境。

× More wonderful and also have the temperate.

✓ more wonderful and also has more warmth.

'have the temperate'表达错误，应为'has more warmth'，表示更有温度（情感）。