Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you love flowers?
受験者
Yes, I love flowers, especially brightly colour ones because they brighten up my mood and make me feel happy. For example, when I see red or yellow flowers, I feel more energetic and positive throughout the day.
試験官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
受験者
Yes, my mother have green fingers The she usually spend hours watering and trimming flowers. Moreover, see sometimes take pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.
試験官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
受験者
There are a lot of flowers in Hanoi. People adhere usually grow flowers along the street and in front of the in front of houses. For example, we can see Jasmine or Lotus.
試験官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
受験者
I readily took photos of flowers because my mobile is about 64GB and I have used 15 so I think it's so limited to store any photos.
試験官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
受験者
In my country people usually send flowers to others especially in Valentine's Day and teacher days. It's bring umm happiness, atmospheres and and brighten someone mood.
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× Yes, my mother have green fingers The she usually spend hours watering and trimming flowers.
✓ Yes, my mother has green fingers. She usually spends hours watering and trimming flowers.
The subject 'my mother' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' and 'spends' instead of 'spend' to agree in number. Also, 'The' is a typo and should be removed or replaced with a period to separate sentences.
× Moreover, see sometimes take pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.
✓ Moreover, she sometimes takes pictures of flowers whenever they bloom.
The pronoun 'see' is incorrect and should be 'she' to refer to the mother. Also, the verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'she'.
× People adhere usually grow flowers along the street and in front of the in front of houses.
✓ People usually grow flowers along the street and in front of houses.
The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the verb 'grow' for correct word order. The word 'adhere' is incorrect in this context and should be removed. Also, 'in front of the in front of houses' is repetitive; it should be 'in front of houses'.
× I readily took photos of flowers because my mobile is about 64GB and I have used 15 so I think it's so limited to store any photos.
✓ I rarely take photos of flowers because my mobile has about 64GB and I have used 15GB, so I think it's too limited to store any photos.
The adverb 'readily' is incorrect here; 'rarely' fits the intended meaning better. The verb tense should be present tense 'take' to match the habitual action. Also, 'my mobile is about 64GB' should be 'my mobile has about 64GB' to correctly describe capacity. 'I have used 15' is incomplete; it should specify '15GB'. 'So limited' should be 'too limited' to express limitation properly.
× In my country people usually send flowers to others especially in Valentine's Day and teacher days.
✓ In my country, people usually send flowers to others, especially on Valentine's Day and Teacher's Day.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect before specific days; 'on' should be used. Also, 'teacher days' should be 'Teacher's Day' to correctly name the holiday. Commas are added for clarity.
× It's bring umm happiness, atmospheres and and brighten someone mood.
✓ It brings happiness, a good atmosphere, and brightens someone's mood.
The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular subject 'It'. 'Atmospheres' is plural and awkward here; 'a good atmosphere' is better. 'Brighten' should be 'brightens' to agree with the subject. 'Someone mood' should be 'someone's mood' to show possession. Also, filler words like 'umm' and repeated 'and' should be removed.
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