Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达“because”，并且可以更自然地连接句子，使表达更流畅。可以增加一些具体描述来丰富内容。

例: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance helps me relax. For instance, I especially admire bamboo and orchids due to their elegant and noble appearance.

提案: 回答中出现了不确定的词汇“umm reels”，应避免使用填充词，且应准确表达植物名称。可以用连词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, my mother is very fond of flowers. She grows many plants on our balcony, including orchids, bamboo, and some fruit plants.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，且表达不够清晰。应避免使用“umm”，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, definitely. My neighborhood is very eco-friendly, so there is plenty of greenery and many flowers around.

提案: 回答中有多处填充词和不清楚的表达“pictures with the eyebrows”，应避免使用填充词，表达要清晰准确。

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I prefer to enjoy them in person. However, my mother likes to photograph flowers to keep memories.

提案: 回答中有多余的填充词，且“the Valentine's Day”应为“Valentine's Day”。应避免重复使用“umm”，并用连词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, people often send flowers in my country, especially on Valentine's Day. For example, boys usually give roses to their girlfriends to express their love.

× Especially I like the bamboo and orchid because I think they are noble.

✓ Especially I like bamboo and orchids because I think they are noble.

bamboo和orchid在这里表示花的种类，应该用复数形式orchids，bamboo作为不可数名词不加冠词。

× Yes, my mother really loves flowers and she plants a lot of flowers in my home's balcony such as orchid, bamboo, umm reels and some fruits.

✓ Yes, my mother really loves flowers and she plants a lot of flowers on my home's balcony such as orchids, bamboo, umm reels and some fruits.

orchid应使用复数形式orchids，因为这里列举的是多种花。

× she plants a lot of flowers in my home's balcony such as orchid, bamboo, umm reels and some fruits.

✓ she plants a lot of flowers on my home's balcony such as orchids, bamboo, umm reels and some fruits.

表示在阳台上种植，应该用介词on而不是in。

× Yes of course, because my neighborhood is very eco friendly so umm it is a lot of greenery and flowers umm besides our neighborhood.

✓ Yes of course, because my neighborhood is very eco friendly so umm there is a lot of greenery and flowers umm around our neighborhood.

greenery是不可数名词，前面用a lot of是正确的，但表达位置时用around更合适，besides用法不当。

× Yes of course, because my neighborhood is very eco friendly so umm it is a lot of greenery and flowers umm besides our neighborhood.

✓ Yes of course, because my neighborhood is very eco friendly so umm there is a lot of greenery and flowers umm around our neighborhood.

表达存在某物时，应使用there is结构，不能用it is。

× No, I don't, uh, I prefer to see flowers face to face, but my mother, umm, loves taking some photos of flowers because she wants to review, umm, some more pictures with the eyebrows. Eyebrow.

✓ No, I don't, uh, I prefer to see flowers face to face, but my mother, umm, loves taking some photos of flowers because she wants to review, umm, some more pictures with the flowers.

eyebrows（眉毛）与上下文不符，应为flowers（花）。

× especially in the Valentine's Day, umm, some boys will send Rose umm to their girlfriend to express love.

✓ especially on Valentine's Day, umm, some boys will send roses umm to their girlfriends to express love.

Valentine's Day前应使用介词on，rose应使用复数roses，girlfriend应使用复数girlfriends，表示泛指。

× especially in the Valentine's Day, umm, some boys will send Rose umm to their girlfriend to express love.

✓ especially on Valentine's Day, umm, some boys will send roses umm to their girlfriends to express love.

表示节日时应使用介词on，而不是in。