Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e 'flower' er plural form 'flowers' use korben. Sentence gulo aro natural korte, apni simple and clear sentence structure use korte paren. Apnar opinion ke aro bistarito korte paren, jemon kon type flowers apni bhalo bashen ba keno flowers apnar jonno important.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize peace and love. Among them, roses are my favorite as they represent deep emotions.

提案: Apni 'flower' er plural form 'flowers' use korben. 'Harvest' shobdo ta flowers er jonno thik na, tar bodole 'grows' ba 'plants' use korte paren. Sentence gulo ke aro shundor vabe link korte paren, jemon 'He has a garden where he grows many types of flowers, such as roses and lilies.'

例: Yes, my best friend Ripon loves flowers. He has a garden where he grows many types of flowers, such as roses and lilies.

提案: Apni 'flowers' er plural form use korben. 'Not as much flowers' er bodole 'not many flowers' bhalo hobe. Sentence gulo ke choto choto kore, linking words diye jemon 'because' use kore, aro clear korte paren. 'Surrounded area are' er bodole 'surrounding area is' hobe.

例: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in a building. The surrounding area is full of buildings, and people do not have gardens on their rooftops. That's why I cannot see many flowers.

提案: Apni 'photos' er plural form use korben. 'Photo describe something that word can' sentence ta clear na, apni bolte paren 'photos can describe things better than words'. Sentence gulo ke choto kore, linking words diye bhalo kore organize korben.

例: No, I don't often take photos of flowers. However, whenever I get a chance, I take photos because I believe photos can describe things better than words and they help us keep memories.

提案: Apni 'flowers' er plural form use korben. 'Give flowers to other' er bodole 'give flowers to others' hobe. Sentence gulo ke aro natural korte, linking words use korte paren. 'People give flower them who love them' sentence ta clear na, apni bolte paren 'people give flowers to those they love'.

例: Yes, I think people in my country often give flowers to others. Flowers are a symbol of love and emotions, so people give flowers to those they love.

× Yes, I love Flower and I think they are the symbol of peace as well as love.

✓ Yes, I love flowers and I think they are the symbol of peace as well as love.

The word 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the sentence refers to flowers in general, which is a plural noun. Using singular 'Flower' is incorrect here as it does not match the intended meaning.

× Yes, my best friend Ripon who loves flower and he has a garden and there he harvest many type of flowers such as rose lilies and others et cetera.

✓ Yes, my best friend Ripon who loves flowers and he has a garden where he harvests many types of flowers such as roses, lilies, and others, etc.

'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to indicate multiple flowers. 'harvest' should be 'harvests' to agree with singular subject 'he'. 'many type' should be 'many types' because 'types' is plural. 'rose lilies' should be 'roses, lilies' as they are separate flower types. Also, 'there he harvest' is better as 'where he harvests' for clarity.

× No, where I live there is not as much flowers because I live in a building and my surrounded area are also full of buildings and they do not do any garden in their rooftop.

✓ No, where I live there are not as many flowers because I live in a building and my surrounding area is also full of buildings and they do not have any garden on their rooftops.

'is not as much flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'are not as many flowers' because 'flowers' is countable plural noun. 'surrounded area are' should be 'surrounding area is' to agree with singular subject. 'do not do any garden' is incorrect; it should be 'do not have any garden'. 'in their rooftop' should be 'on their rooftops' as 'on' is the correct preposition and 'rooftops' plural.

× That's why I think I cannot see a lot of flowers.

✓ That's why I think I cannot see a lot of flowers.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed.

× No, I often don't take any photo on flowers, but whenever I get a chance I take a photo of flowers because I think photo describe something that word can and photo gives us memories and that's why I capture photos whenever I see any good things.

✓ No, I often don't take any photos of flowers, but whenever I get a chance I take a photo of flowers because I think photos describe something that words cannot and photos give us memories, and that's why I capture photos whenever I see anything good.

'take any photo on flowers' should be 'take any photos of flowers' because 'photos of' is the correct collocation. 'photo describe' should be 'photos describe' to agree in number. 'something that word can' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'something that words cannot'. 'photo gives us memories' should be 'photos give us memories' for plural agreement. 'any good things' should be 'anything good' for correct quantifier and adjective order.

× Yes, I think so. In my country people often give flowers to other and I think flower is a symbol of love and emotions.

✓ Yes, I think so. In my country, people often give flowers to others and I think flowers are a symbol of love and emotions.

'give flowers to other' should be 'give flowers to others' because 'others' is the correct plural pronoun here. 'flower is a symbol' should be 'flowers are a symbol' to agree in number with plural subject.

× That's why I think people give flower them who love them.

✓ That's why I think people give flowers to those who love them.

'give flower them' is incorrect; it should be 'give flowers to those' to correctly use the pronoun and preposition. 'those' refers to people who love them, making the sentence clear and grammatically correct.