Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'flower' nên dùng số nhiều 'flowers', và câu 'It's make me feel' nên là 'It makes me feel'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý đến cấu trúc câu và chia động từ cho đúng.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they harmonize beautifully, creating a lovely scene. They always make me feel happy and relaxed whenever I see them.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không rõ ràng, ví dụ 'love flower' nên là 'loves flowers', và câu 'MMM see often spend time' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She often spends time in the garden, especially enjoying sunflowers and other colorful flowers because they make her feel happy and relaxed.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến số nhiều của danh từ 'flowers' và cách dùng từ như 'publics' không đúng, nên dùng 'public places'. Câu ví dụ cũng không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ chính xác hơn.

例: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, especially in public places like parks and gardens. For example, I often see tulips and roses in the park every morning when I go for a walk.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách thêm lý do hoặc tần suất chụp ảnh. Ngoài ra, chú ý dùng số nhiều 'photos' và 'flowers' cho đúng ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy capturing their beauty in my daily life.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về các dịp tặng hoa.

例: Yes, people in my country often give flowers on different occasions, such as parties or graduation days, as a congratulatory gift.

× Yes, I love flower because I love the ways flower harmony with each other, creating a beautiful picture.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because I love the way flowers harmonize with each other, creating a beautiful picture.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context of multiple flowers. 'Ways' should be singular 'way' because it refers to a single manner or method. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' again to refer to multiple flowers. 'Harmony' is a noun; the verb form 'harmonize' is needed here to describe the action. This correction addresses pluralization and verb form errors.

× It's make me feel happy and comfortable whenever I see it.

✓ It makes me feel happy and comfortable whenever I see it.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number and person.

× Yes, I know my sister who love flower MMM see often spend time in the garden especially enjoying sunflower or and other colorful flower.

✓ Yes, I know my sister who loves flowers. She often spends time in the garden, especially enjoying sunflowers and other colorful flowers.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'my sister'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer to multiple flowers. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to match the context. 'Spend' should be 'spends' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. The sentence is also split for clarity.

× Umm the flower makes her feel happy and relaxed.

✓ Umm, the flowers make her feel happy and relaxed.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer to multiple flowers. The verb 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'.

× Yes, there are a few flower around where I live, especially in publics, parks and gardens.

✓ Yes, there are a few flowers around where I live, especially in public parks and gardens.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'a few'. 'Publics' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'public' to describe parks and gardens.

× For example, I often see to live or roses in the park every mornings whenever I walk.

✓ For example, I often see tulips or roses in the park every morning whenever I walk.

The phrase 'see to live' is incorrect; likely intended 'see tulips'. 'Every mornings' should be singular 'every morning'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I take photo of flower.

✓ Yes, I take photos of flowers.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to indicate multiple pictures. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer to multiple flowers.

× Yes, uh, people are usually give Flower of Mandy's different occasion, one of the more popular occasion in a party parties, umm, or a graduation days, umm flower you as a congratulation gift.

✓ Yes, people usually give flowers on many different occasions. One of the more popular occasions is parties or graduation days. Flowers are given as congratulation gifts.

The modal verb 'are usually give' is incorrect; it should be 'usually give'. 'Flower of Mandy's' is unclear and corrected to 'flowers on many different occasions'. 'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions'. 'Party parties' is redundant; corrected to 'parties'. 'Graduation days' is pluralized correctly. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.