Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语气不够自然，存在重复和犹豫词汇，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免多余的填充词。

例: I don't usually plant flowers, but I do love them because they look beautiful and brighten up any space.

提案: 回答中有较多犹豫词和重复，建议使用连贯的句子表达，并用连接词使内容更流畅。

例: Yes, my grandma and some of my teachers love flowers, especially those who are middle-aged or older, as they seem to appreciate them more.

提案: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议直接回答问题并用具体细节支持，避免语无伦次。

例: I live in a house with a garden where my mom plants vegetables, but there are also many flowers blooming throughout the year.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复和犹豫词，建议简洁表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I rarely take photos of flowers because I'm not into planting them, but if I see really beautiful ones, I might take pictures about once a month.

提案: 回答中有重复和犹豫，且句子不完整，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并补充完整信息。

例: People in my country often send flowers during festivals. For example, on Teacher's Day, which is on September 10th in China, we usually buy flowers to show appreciation.

× I would answer that I do love them because they have beautiful looking.

✓ I would answer that I do love them because they look beautiful.

这里的 'beautiful looking' 用法不正确，应该用形容词 'beautiful' 来修饰 'them'，而不是名词 'looking'。正确表达是 'they look beautiful'，意思是它们看起来很美。

× some of my teachers love flowers and they are like, umm, most of them are like umm in mid age or elders.

✓ some of my teachers love flowers and they are like, umm, most of them are like umm middle-aged or elderly.

'mid age' 和 'elders' 用法不准确，应该用形容词 'middle-aged' 和 'elderly' 来描述人的年龄。

× there's a garden around it and umm, my mom would plant many vegetables in the garden and every time they, well, they so, so there is a constant season in the whole year that there are many flowers.

✓ there's a garden around it and umm, my mom plants many vegetables in the garden and all year round there are many flowers.

原句中 'every time they, well, they so, so there is a constant season in the whole year' 结构混乱且用词不当，改为 'all year round' 表示全年不断，更符合表达习惯。

× I, I, I would take pictures, but I, I think I'm the probability would be like, uh, once a month.

✓ I would take pictures, but I think the probability is like, uh, once a month.

'I'm the probability' 语法错误，应该用 'the probability is' 来表达概率。

× they would buy flowers and send each other.

✓ they would buy flowers and send them to each other.

动词 'send' 后面需要加宾语和介词，正确结构是 'send something to someone'。

× So yesterday I bought some flowers for my.

✓ So yesterday I bought some flowers for my teacher.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，应该补充完整宾语 'my teacher'。