Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式描述对花的喜爱。

例: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance is very refreshing. They always lift my mood and make me feel happy.

提案: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议理清思路，使用简单句子表达母亲喜欢花，并具体说明她的行为。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers very much. She buys fresh flowers almost every day and reads books about how to take care of them at home.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够准确。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地说明居住环境。

例: Not really. I live in a city surrounded by desert, so there are not many plants or flowers nearby.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富表达。

例: Usually, when I see some beautiful flowers, I take photos of them; however, I don't do this very often.

提案: 回答中语法错误和表达不清晰，建议理顺句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，明确说明年轻人送花的原因。

例: Yes, people do send flowers, especially young people, because they think it is very romantic to give flowers to their partners.

× Yes, I like the smells are that flowers bring to me.

✓ Yes, I like the smells that flowers bring to me.

句子中“the smells are that”结构不正确，应该直接用“the smells that”来引导定语从句，修饰“smells”。

× she even bought books and washing the clothes how to.

✓ she even bought books on how to wash clothes.

“washing the clothes how to”语序错误，正确表达应为“books on how to wash clothes”，即“关于如何洗衣服的书”。

× Plant flowers in the home.

✓ She learned how to plant flowers at home.

该句缺少主语和谓语，且表达不完整，需补充主语和谓语，使句子完整通顺。

× there aren't many planet planets around us.

✓ there aren't many plants around us.

“planet planets”重复且错误，应为“plants”，表示“植物”。

× because it they said it's very romantic to send flowers to their couple.

✓ because they said it's very romantic to send flowers to their partners.

“it they”重复且错误，且“their couple”用法不当，改为“their partners”更合适，指代恋人。