Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Also, use plural verbs with plural subjects, e.g., 'flowers make me feel'.

例: Yes, I really love flowers because they make me feel very peaceful, especially those with brilliant colors.

提案: Remember to use correct verb agreement: 'grandmother really loves'. Also, simplify and clarify your sentence to sound more natural and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, my grandmother really loves flowers and enjoys planting different varieties in her garden.

提案: Try to answer directly first, then add details. Use present tense for habitual actions and avoid vague phrases like 'etcetera'.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my grandmother plants various flowers such as marigolds, sunflowers, and roses.

提案: Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'get it safe' and 'share your stamps'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy their brilliant colors. Whenever I see a beautiful flower blooming, I feel inspired to capture its beauty with my camera. These photos help me appreciate nature and share its beauty with others.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use correct vocabulary, e.g., 'birthdays and marriages'. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays and marriages. Flowers are considered beautiful and meaningful gifts that symbolize love and good wishes. Nowadays, it is common to send flowers to express feelings and celebrate important events.

× Yes, I really love flowers. It makes me feel very peaceful, especially, uh, with flowers with brilliant color.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers. They make me feel very peaceful, especially, uh, with flowers with brilliant colors.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'color' should be plural 'colors' to agree with 'flowers'.

× Yes, my grandmother really love flowers and she's really fond of planting on her garden regarding different types of or different varieties of flowers.

✓ Yes, my grandmother really loves flowers and she's really fond of planting in her garden different types or varieties of flowers.

The subject 'my grandmother' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love'. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect here; it should be 'in' for 'garden'. The phrase 'regarding different types of or different varieties of flowers' is awkward and corrected to 'different types or varieties of flowers'.

× Yes, my grandmother really love flowers and she's really fond of planting on her garden regarding different types of or different varieties of flowers.

✓ Yes, my grandmother really loves flowers and she's really fond of planting in her garden different types or varieties of flowers.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to 'garden'; the correct preposition is 'in'.

× As I live with my grandmother, she is very fascinated towards planting.

✓ As I live with my grandmother, she is very fascinated with planting.

The correct preposition to use with 'fascinated' is 'with', not 'towards'.

× She planted varieties of plants like Marigold, sunflower, rose, etcetera.

✓ She planted varieties of plants like marigolds, sunflowers, roses, etcetera.

When listing multiple types of plants, the plural form should be used: 'marigolds', 'sunflowers', 'roses'.

× I really enjoy the brilliant colors and get it safe.

✓ I really enjoy the brilliant colors and keep them safe.

The phrase 'get it safe' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'keep them safe' referring to the photos or flowers. Also, 'them' is plural to match 'colors' or 'photos'.

× So whenever I see a beautiful flower blowing, I feel inspired and capture captures its beauty with my camera.

✓ So whenever I see a beautiful flower blooming, I feel inspired and capture its beauty with my camera.

The word 'blowing' is incorrect; the correct word is 'blooming' to describe a flower opening. Also, 'capture captures' is redundant; only 'capture' is needed.

× Taking these pictures help me appreciate nature more and share your stamps with others.

✓ Taking these pictures helps me appreciate nature more and share my photos with others.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'Taking these pictures'. Also, 'your stamps' is incorrect; it should be 'my photos' to refer to the speaker's pictures.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on the special occasions like birthday and Marys.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like birthdays and marriages.

The phrase 'on the special occasions' should be 'on special occasions' without 'the'. Also, 'birthday' and 'Marys' are incorrect; the plural forms 'birthdays' and 'marriages' are appropriate.

× Nowadays, it is very common for people to send flowers to express their feeling and celebrate important.

✓ Nowadays, it is very common for people to send flowers to express their feelings and celebrate important occasions.

The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match 'their'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'celebrate important' should be 'celebrate important occasions'.