Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, complete your sentences fully to avoid leaving thoughts unfinished. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: I absolutely love flowers because they come in vibrant colors and have unique fragrances that instantly lift my mood. Whenever I feel sad, looking at bright red roses or colorful tulips makes me happy and energetic. Their beauty and scent always brighten my day.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and keep it concise.

例: Yes, my father loves flowers. We have a garden in our front yard with many types and colors of flowers. He especially enjoys hanging flowers because they add charm to our home.

提案: Good use of supporting details and linking words. However, watch for grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement and article usage. Also, try to be more specific about the season and the types of flowers if possible.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because the city organizes a flower festival every spring. This event encourages people to plant flowers in public spaces, which enhances the city's beauty. As a result, streets and parks look attractive and colorful throughout the year. Additionally, flowers are a great way to express emotions.

提案: Reduce filler words to improve fluency. Try to combine sentences using linking words for coherence. Also, avoid ending sentences abruptly and keep answers concise.

例: I like to take photos of flowers whenever I get a chance because they are beautiful and colorful. These photos not only look attractive but also make great content to share on social media or with family and friends. Taking pictures helps me appreciate nature and capture special moments.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar and vocabulary, such as 'appreciation' and 'strengthen relationships.' Provide clear examples and link ideas logically.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions. For example, flowers are commonly given to express sympathy during funerals or to show appreciation on birthdays and anniversaries. Sending flowers is a thoughtful way to convey emotions and strengthen relationships.

× Moreover, flowers is a great way to express our emotions.

✓ Moreover, flowers are a great way to express our emotions.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× This event engages people to plant flowers and public spaces, which are really enhances the beauty of the city.

✓ This event engages people to plant flowers in public spaces, which really enhances the beauty of the city.

The preposition 'in' is needed after 'plant flowers' to indicate where the flowers are planted. Also, 'are' should be removed to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the event. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and subject-verb agreement issue.

× For example, for flowers are commonly given to express sympathy during funerals or to show appre appreciation on birthdays and anniversaries.

✓ For example, flowers are commonly given to express sympathy during funerals or to show appreciation on birthdays and anniversaries.

The phrase 'for flowers' is incorrect; 'flowers' alone is correct as the subject. Also, 'appre appreciation' is a typo and should be 'appreciation'. This is a singular and plural issue and a spelling error.

× Flowers is a thoughtful way to convey emotions and spending relationship.

✓ Flowers are a thoughtful way to convey emotions and strengthen relationships.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'spending relationship' is incorrect; it should be 'strengthen relationships' to convey the intended meaning. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect word usage.