Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to use correct singular/plural forms and provide a clear reason why you like flowers. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love flowers because they come in many different varieties. My favorite flower is the rose because of its beautiful red color and pleasant fragrance.

提案: Your answer has repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and use correct verb forms. Add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers the most. She has a garden at our house where she grows many different types of flowers because she is very interested in gardening.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains many repetitions and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences logically.

例: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live. Both my house and my neighbors have beautiful flower gardens with different kinds of roses and other flowers.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with clear sentences and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: No, I don't take photos of flowers every day, but I usually take pictures about twice a week because I enjoy capturing their beauty.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and repetition. Try to use simple and clear sentences to explain when people send flowers and for what occasions.

例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers during special occasions such as weddings, birthday parties, and other celebrations to express their good wishes.

× Yes, I like flower because it has many different flowers.

✓ Yes, I like flowers because there are many different kinds.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context of many different types. Also, 'it has' is incorrect here; 'there are' is appropriate for plural subjects.

× The most I like is the Rose.

✓ The one I like the most is the rose.

The phrase 'The most I like' is incorrect; the correct form is 'The one I like the most'. Also, 'Rose' should not be capitalized unless it is a proper noun.

× With rose is like a red color and like a bucket of the flower.

✓ The rose is red in color and looks like a bunch of flowers.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes my mother likes the flower flower most and my mother have a garden in our in our house and different different types of flower has grown in our house by my mother.

✓ Yes, my mother likes flowers the most and she has a garden in our house where different types of flowers have grown.

'Flower flower' is repetitive and incorrect; 'flowers' is plural. 'My mother have' should be 'my mother has' for subject-verb agreement. 'Different different types of flower has grown' should be 'different types of flowers have grown' to match plural subject and verb agreement.

× She's very interested in flowers and love flower.

✓ She is very interested in flowers and loves them.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' and pronoun 'them' is used to avoid repetition.

× Yeah, there, there are lots of flower in my house and in my in beside my house they are in in our neighbor they they have also flower garden like different roses and many, many flowers where they absorb that's it.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers in my house and beside my house. Our neighbors also have flower gardens with different roses and many flowers.

'Lots of flower' should be 'lots of flowers' for plural. The sentence is very disorganized and repetitive; it needs to be simplified and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, but I really take twice a week, not at every day, but I like to click photo of flower and send your other not in daily life I will I will not click for the, you know, twice a week.

✓ No, but I really take photos twice a week, not every day. I like to take photos of flowers and send them to others, but not daily; only twice a week.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and awkward phrasing. 'Take' should be 'take photos', 'click photo' is informal and incorrect. 'Send your other' is unclear; corrected to 'send them to others'.

× Yes, in our country people give unseen flowers in wedding ceremonies like birthday party and in a party and many many more descends the flower and piece of pocket for the ceremonies to sing.

✓ Yes, in our country people give flowers at wedding ceremonies, birthday parties, and many other occasions. They also use flower petals and pieces of cloth for the ceremonies.

'Unseen flowers' is unclear and likely incorrect; changed to 'flowers'. 'Descends the flower and piece of pocket' is unclear and corrected to 'flower petals and pieces of cloth'. Also, plural forms and prepositions corrected for clarity.