Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy flowers because they have a special meaning for me. They always lift my spirits and help me relax, especially after a busy day in the city. For instance, whenever I see a colorful flower, I feel refreshed and more energetic, which motivates me to keep going.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ, nhưng câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và thiếu từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và các từ nối phù hợp.

例: Yes, I know my neighbor, Miss Lam, who is very passionate about planting flowers. She has a beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms. I really admire her dedication because she spends a lot of time carefully watering and taking care of her plants to keep them healthy.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nội dung phù hợp nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như số nhiều của danh từ và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều.

例: Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens. During spring, the streets are lit up with colorful blossoms like roses and tulips. I really enjoy seeing these flowers because they add a refreshing and natural touch to the urban environment.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ ý nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như số nhiều và chia động từ. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I have recently taken many photos of flowers in my daily life because I enjoy capturing the beauty of different kinds of flowers. I usually share these photos with my family or keep them as memories. Taking pictures of flowers also helps me appreciate nature more closely.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về danh từ số nhiều và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như "uh" trong bài thi và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as graduations, birthdays, or anniversaries. Flowers are considered a thoughtful and meaningful gift to express love, gratitude, and sympathy.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms.

No correction needed for this sentence as the past participle 'filled' is correctly used here to describe the garden.

× She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms. I really admire her dedication because she spent a lot of time carefully watering and take care of her plants to keep them healthy.

✓ She has her own beautiful garden filled with a variety of bright and colorful blooms. I really admire her dedication because she spends a lot of time carefully watering and taking care of her plants to keep them healthy.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'spends' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'watering and take care' is incorrect parallel structure; it should be 'watering and taking care' to maintain parallelism in verb forms.

× Yes, there are quite a few flower where I live, especially in public park and residential gardens.

✓ Yes, there are quite a few flowers where I live, especially in public parks and residential gardens.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'quite a few' which indicates plural. Similarly, 'public park' should be plural 'public parks' to match the plural context.

× During spring, the streets are lighted with colorful blossom like roses and tulips.

✓ During spring, the streets are lit with colorful blossoms like roses and tulips.

'Lighted' is less common than 'lit' in this context. Also, 'blossom' should be plural 'blossoms' to match the plural examples 'roses and tulips'.

× I enjoy seeing the flowers because they add a refreshing and natural touch to urban environment.

✓ I enjoy seeing the flowers because they add a refreshing and natural touch to the urban environment.

The noun 'urban environment' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific environment.

× I usually share this photo with my families or keep them as memories.

✓ I usually share these photos with my family or keep them as memories.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'them'. 'Families' should be singular 'family' because it refers to one's own family.

× Taking picture of flowers also help me appreciate nature more closely.

✓ Taking pictures of flowers also helps me appreciate nature more closely.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match the general activity. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Taking pictures'.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to other on special occasion like uh, graduation, birthday or anniversary.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like, uh, graduation, birthday, or anniversary.

'Other' should be plural 'others' to match 'people'. 'Occasion' should be plural 'occasions' because multiple types are listed.

× Flowers are considered like a thoughtful and meaningful gift to express love, gratitude and sympathy.

✓ Flowers are considered a thoughtful and meaningful gift to express love, gratitude, and sympathy.

The preposition 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'considered' is followed directly by the noun phrase. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.