Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，表达有些笨拙。建议用更自然的表达方式直接回答问题，并简洁说明原因。

例: I don't particularly love flowers, but I appreciate their beauty when I see them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，并具体说明父母如何喜欢花。

例: Yes, my parents love flowers. They enjoy gardening and often read books about how to take care of plants.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不连贯。建议用连贯的句子描述居住环境中的花卉情况。

例: I live in an apartment with a small garden that has roses and lilies. Also, there is a park nearby with many flowers.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议用简洁明了的句子说明拍照习惯。

例: I sometimes take photos of flowers when I visit flower fields, but not very often. My parents take photos more frequently.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不完整。建议用完整句子说明送花的习惯和场合。

例: Yes, in China, people often give flowers on special occasions like birthdays and Valentine's Day, but it depends on the person.

× They also watching reading some how to take care of.

✓ They are also watching and reading some videos on how to take care of them.

句子中缺少助动词，动词watching和reading需要与助动词连用构成现在进行时。应使用'are watching'和'reading'。

× My neighborhood there has.

✓ There is a park nearby in my neighborhood.

句子结构不完整，'My neighborhood there has'缺少宾语，正确表达应为'There is a park nearby in my neighborhood'，使用there be结构说明存在某物。

× Yes, but I do it once I saw a lot of flower field and I took some photos but I don't do it much my parents take.

✓ Yes, but I did it once when I saw a large flower field and took some photos, but I don't do it often; my parents take photos more.

句中时态混乱，描述过去的动作应使用过去时'did'和'took'，而不是现在时'do'。此外，句子结构不清晰，需调整以表达完整意思。

× Yes, in China people gave flowers to other in special days like birthday and Valentine's. But it depends go.

✓ Yes, in China people give flowers to others on special days like birthdays and Valentine's Day. But it depends.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时'give'，而非过去时'gave'。此外，'other'应为'others'，'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，'Valentine's'应完整为'Valentine's Day'。句尾'But it depends go'不完整，去掉'go'。