Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更连贯的句子结构。

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers. They always face the sun and have a bright yellow color, which makes me feel happy. To me, sunflowers symbolize positivity and warmth.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如单复数和时态问题。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并避免口语化表达。

例: Yes, one of my best friends is a big fan of planting sunflowers. She often sends us pictures of her new flowers.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和表达方式，确保意思明确。

例: There is a small garden in my yard where my mother plants various flowers. It makes the place look very beautiful and pleasant.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，句子不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用正确时态和完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because I am a big fan of them. I like to capture beautiful and unique flowers that I haven't seen before.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和口语化表达，建议使用更正式和连贯的句子，避免重复。

例: Yes, people often send flowers because it is a sweet and gentle gesture. Flowers can express various emotions such as love, gratitude, or simply brighten someone's day.

× Yes, one of my best friend who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always send her new flowers for us.

✓ Yes, one of my best friends who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always sends her new flowers to us.

这里的“one of my best friend”中，friend应为复数形式friends，因为“one of”后面应接复数名词。动词send应改为sends以符合第三人称单数主语she。介词用法也需调整为send ... to us。

× Yes, one of my best friend who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always send her new flowers for us.

✓ Yes, one of my best friends who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always sends her new flowers to us.

主语she是第三人称单数，谓语动词send应加-s变为sends，表示主谓一致。

× Yes, one of my best friend who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always send her new flowers for us.

✓ Yes, one of my best friends who is a big fan of planting sunflowers, you know, and she always sends her new flowers to us.

动词send后面接收赠对象时应使用介词to，而不是for。

× Yet they are they are a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which give me a sense of aesthetically pleasant.

✓ There is a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which gives me a sense of aesthetic pleasure.

原句中“they are they are a little garden”结构错误，应改为“There is a little garden”。动词give应改为gives以符合主语which指代的单数。

× Yet they are they are a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which give me a sense of aesthetically pleasant.

✓ There is a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which gives me a sense of aesthetic pleasure.

表达存在某物时，应使用“There is”结构，而不是“they are”。

× Yet they are they are a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which give me a sense of aesthetically pleasant.

✓ There is a little garden in my yard, so my mother always plants a variety of flowers in it, which gives me a sense of aesthetic pleasure.

“aesthetically pleasant”用法不当，应改为名词短语“aesthetic pleasure”，更符合表达习惯。

× Yes I do, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life because just just what I said, I was a big fan of flowers so I always to record the beautiful and special flowers that I haven't seen before.

✓ Yes I do, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life because, just as I said, I am a big fan of flowers so I always record the beautiful and special flowers that I haven't seen before.

“I was a big fan”时态不符，应为现在时“I am a big fan”。“I always to record”结构错误，应去掉to，改为“I always record”。

× Yes I do, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life because just just what I said, I was a big fan of flowers so I always to record the beautiful and special flowers that I haven't seen before.

✓ Yes I do, I really love taking photos of flowers in my daily life because, just as I said, I am a big fan of flowers so I always record the beautiful and special flowers that I haven't seen before.

表达习惯和时态应保持一致，描述现在的喜好应使用现在时态。

× Yes, because in my opinion, sending flowers is a very sweet and softer gesture, you know, which can express different emotions like love, gratitude or just to brighten one's one's day.

✓ Yes, because in my opinion, sending flowers is a very sweet and soft gesture, you know, which can express different emotions like love, gratitude or just to brighten one's day.

“softer”比较级用法不当，应改为形容词“soft”。“one's one's day”重复，应去掉一个“one's”。