Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“rarely love flowers”表达不清晰，且有多余的填充词。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they come in various colors and have pleasant fragrances. They always make me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答中有严重语法错误和表达不完整，如“married like flowers”和“unpleasant fragrance”与语境不符，且句子未完成。建议使用正确的句子结构，表达清晰完整。

例: My mother loves flowers, so she has a big garden where she grows various kinds of flowers like lilies and roses. They have beautiful colors and pleasant fragrances.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“these flowers can make me”未完成句子。建议完整表达观点，避免语法错误，并使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, there are many flowers on my school campus, which is very beautiful and has unique landscapes. I enjoy walking around there because the flowers make me feel peaceful.

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复和填充词，如“Umm”、“it's it's”。建议减少重复，表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are beautiful, and capturing their images helps me remember special moments.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（如“GRA”应为“gratitude”）和表达不准确（“standing flowers”应为“sending flowers”）。建议注意拼写和用词准确，表达清晰。

例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers as gifts to show their love and gratitude. Also, giving flowers when meeting someone for the first time is a nice way to show friendliness.

× Yes, I rarely love flowers.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers.

这里的'really'被误写为'rarely'，导致意思相反。'Rarely'表示很少，而题意应表达喜欢花，故应改为'really'。

× Umm, every has various, umm, colors and uh, fragrant smells.

✓ Umm, every flower has various colors and fragrant smells.

句中缺少名词，'every'后应接单数名词，故补充'flower'。

× My mom married like flowers, uh, so she has a big garden to plant various kinds of flowers like Lily and roses and they have umm, beautiful colors and uh, unpleasant fragrance, which made me very.

✓ My mom likes flowers, so she has a big garden to plant various kinds of flowers like lilies and roses. They have beautiful colors and pleasant fragrance, which makes me very happy.

'married like flowers'应为'my mom likes flowers'。'Lily'复数应为'lilies'。'unpleasant fragrance'应为'pleasant fragrance'以符合语境。句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Yes, there are lots of flowers uh, in my school campus where I live umm, it is very beautiful and has its special landscapes.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers in my school campus where I live. It is very beautiful and has its special landscapes.

句子中应分为两句，'it'指代校园，需大写开头。

× I very enjoy walking around in the school campus and uh, these flowers can make me.

✓ I really enjoy walking around the school campus, and these flowers make me happy.

'I very enjoy'应为'I really enjoy'。句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× Yes, I often take photos of flowers Umm as it's it's very beautiful and I think taking photos of flowers UMM can capture some special moments in my life.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they are very beautiful, and I think taking photos of flowers can capture some special moments in my life.

'it's it's'重复，应改为'they are'指代复数的'flowers'。

× Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others as a gift to show their love and GRA and gratitude.

✓ Yes, in my country people often send flowers to others as a gift to show their love and gratitude.

'GRA'为拼写错误，应为'gratitude'。

× Also, standing flowers to people who you meet first is a very pleasant way to show your friendliness.

✓ Also, sending flowers to people you meet for the first time is a very pleasant way to show your friendliness.

'standing flowers'应为'sending flowers'。'who you meet first'应为'you meet for the first time'。