Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they have a pleasant fragrance that refreshes me. In fact, many of my perfumes are floral scented.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并避免重复。

例: My mother loves flowers too. For example, she often buys flowers to put in a vase to decorate our home and make the space feel fresh and lively.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不当（如'vegetarians'应为'vegetation'），表达不够连贯。建议加强词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

例: No, there are not many flowers where I live. The estate has many plants and trees, but only a few flowers.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，建议简化句子，使用更准确的表达方式，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because it helps me capture beautiful moments and relax.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并注意单复数形式的正确使用。

例: People in my country don't send flowers very often, but they usually give flowers as gifts during special festivals.

× I love their their great smile, their great smell and and also umm, because I, I think their smells can really refract can really re uh, be refreshing and also uh, my perfumes are all of the flowers ma'am.

✓ I love their great smiles, their great smells and also, umm, because I think their smells can really be refreshing, and also, uh, my perfumes are all from flowers, ma'am.

这里的'smile'和'smell'应使用复数形式，因为指的是多种花的多种气味和外观。'their smells'也应为复数。'my perfumes are all of the flowers'表达不准确，改为'my perfumes are all from flowers'更符合英语习惯。

× sometimes she will buy some flowers and put in to a vast and and to decorate a home and refreshing the whole space.

✓ sometimes she will buy some flowers and put them into a vase to decorate the home and refresh the whole space.

'put in to a vast'中的'vast'应为'vase'，且'put in to'应合并为'put into'。'and refreshing'应改为动词原形'refresh'以保持句子结构一致。

× in the estate I live there are so much uh, plants and vegetarians, like trees or grass, but all uh.

✓ in the estate I live, there are so many plants and vegetables, like trees or grass, but, uh,

'so much'用于不可数名词，'plants'是可数名词，应使用'so many'。'vegetarians'错误，应为'vegetables'。

× I usually do that because I think taking photos of flowers is an enjoyable thing that to record some a special or beautiful moment of, uh, in my lives.

✓ I usually do that because I think taking photos of flowers is an enjoyable thing to record some special or beautiful moments in my life.

'that to record'结构不正确，应直接用不定式'to record'。'some a special'重复且错误，应为'some special'。'in my lives'应为单数形式'in my life'。

× people people won't send flowers to their friends or family every day or every week, but they will send flower as a gifts in some special festivals.

✓ people won't send flowers to their friends or family every day or every week, but they will send flowers as gifts on some special festivals.

'flower'应为复数'flowers'，'a gifts'中冠词'a'与复数'gifts'不匹配，应去掉冠词。'in some special festivals'应改为'on some special festivals'。