Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp sai. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ "flower" nhiều lần. Bạn nên thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I love flowers very much because they are beautiful and seeing them makes me feel happy and peaceful.

提案: Bạn cần tránh lặp lại từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về mẹ bạn và việc trồng hoa.

例: My mother loves flowers because she is a romantic person. She grows many flowers in our garden, and my father also enjoys them.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên mô tả cụ thể hơn về hoa ở khu vực bạn sống.

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my area because many houses and apartments have gardens with different kinds of flowers and trees.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sắp xếp câu hợp lý, tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I see them because they are beautiful. I also buy flowers once or twice a week.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và thiếu rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về các dịp tặng hoa.

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts during celebrations such as graduations and parties.

× I love flower very much because flower is so beautiful and and when I see when I see flowers, I have so happiness.

✓ I love flowers very much because flowers are so beautiful and when I see flowers, I feel so happy.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when talking generally. Also, 'flower is' should be 'flowers are' to agree in number. 'I have so happiness' is incorrect; it should be 'I feel so happy' to express emotion correctly.

× Yes, because it's so it's make me feel peaceful.

✓ Yes, because it makes me feel peaceful.

The phrase 'it's make' is incorrect; the verb should be in third person singular present tense 'makes' to agree with 'it'.

× My mother so loves flowers because she say is a romantic woman and she and she and she grew many flower in my garden house, in my garden house and my dad and my dad.

✓ My mother loves flowers very much because she says she is a romantic woman and she grows many flowers in my garden, and my dad too.

The verbs 'say' and 'grew' are incorrect for present tense third person singular; they should be 'says' and 'grows'. 'Many flower' should be 'many flowers' for plural. Repetition and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.

× In my area, I live to have to have flowers because there's so many, many, many house and I and house and apartment.

✓ In my area, I live where there are many houses and apartments with flowers.

The phrase 'there's so many' is incorrect; 'there are so many' is correct for plural 'houses'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes. And Donna Tree the flower.

✓ Yes, and there are also many trees and flowers.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper structure.

× Yes I'm so many images of flowers, when I see flowers I will take photo this flower and I buy flowers once or twice a week because flower so beautiful.

✓ Yes, I have many photos of flowers. When I see flowers, I take photos of them, and I buy flowers once or twice a week because flowers are so beautiful.

'I'm so many images' is incorrect; 'I have many photos' is correct. 'I will take photo this flower' is incorrect; it should be 'I take photos of them'. 'Flower so beautiful' needs 'flowers are so beautiful' for subject-verb agreement and plural form.

× Yes, in the country people, people, people send flowers as from a present, present in celebrate graduation party just.

✓ Yes, in my country, people often send flowers as presents to celebrate graduation parties.

The phrase 'as from a present, present in celebrate graduation party just' is incorrect. It is corrected to proper prepositional phrases and plural forms for clarity and grammatical correctness.