Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and sunflowers, because they symbolize different meanings such as love and grace. I usually plant these flowers in my room as they help improve my mental health.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Please complete your sentences and use correct prepositions and verb forms. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, my mom loves sunflowers because she believes they symbolize happiness and peace. She feels that having sunflowers around helps her manage negative emotions and relieve stress after work.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mom loves planting various types in our garden outside. She believes that the flowers create a peaceful and relaxing atmosphere, which helps me study at home.

提案: Your answer seems off-topic and contains errors. You mentioned 'food tours' instead of 'flower photos'. Please answer the question directly, use correct vocabulary, and link your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers with my smartphone and share them on social media. I believe these photos send positive messages to my friends and motivate them to overcome difficulties in their studies.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Please complete your sentences, use correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, in my country, many people send flowers to their loved ones on Valentine's Day, especially roses. Roses symbolize love and help express feelings, making it easier to show affection to partners.

× Yes, I love flowers, especially for rose and sunflowers.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and sunflowers.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used here. When listing examples, we do not use 'for' before the nouns. Also, 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'sunflowers' and the general statement about flowers.

× It is because it the flowers symbolize the different meanings such as love and graceful.

✓ It is because the flowers symbolize different meanings such as love and grace.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used twice and unnecessarily. Also, 'graceful' is an adjective, but here a noun 'grace' is needed to match 'love' as meanings.

× And I usually plants the flowers in my room because it's helped me to benefit from my mental health.

✓ And I usually plant flowers in my room because it helps me benefit my mental health.

The verb 'plants' should be 'plant' to agree with the subject 'I' (present tense). Also, 'it's helped me to benefit' is incorrect; 'it helps me benefit' is the correct present tense form.

× Yes, my mom loves sunflowers because she thinks that sunflowers are symbolized for happiness and peaceful.

✓ Yes, my mom loves sunflowers because she thinks that sunflowers symbolize happiness and peace.

The phrase 'are symbolized for' is incorrect; 'symbolize' is the correct verb. Also, 'peaceful' is an adjective, but here the noun 'peace' is needed.

× She thinks that it helps her to manage her negative emotions and relieve her stress after finishing her work and in additional it is the.

✓ She thinks that it helps her manage her negative emotions and relieve her stress after finishing her work. In addition, it is...

The phrase 'and in additional it is the' is incorrect and incomplete. 'In addition' is the correct phrase, and the sentence should be split for clarity.

× Yes, as I mentioned that my mom loves flowers so much, she plants various types of flowers in the garden which is outside our home and she thinks that it creates the peaceful and realizing atmosphere for me to studying at home.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, my mom loves flowers so much. She plants various types of flowers in the garden outside our home, and she thinks that it creates a peaceful and relaxing atmosphere for me to study at home.

The phrase 'which is outside our home' is better as 'in the garden outside our home'. 'Realizing' is incorrect; 'relaxing' is the correct adjective. 'To studying' should be 'to study'.

× Yes, I usually take food tours in my smart smartphone and I like to share it in the social media because I think it shows the positive message to my friends and motivates them to face the difficulties in their studies.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos with my smartphone and I like to share them on social media because I think they show positive messages to my friends and motivate them to face difficulties in their studies.

'Take food tours' is incorrect; 'take photos' is correct. 'In my smart smartphone' should be 'with my smartphone'. 'Share it in the social media' should be 'share them on social media'. 'The positive message' should be 'positive messages'.

× So I think it is a method to encourage with each other.

✓ So I think it is a method to encourage each other.

The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here. The phrase 'encourage each other' is correct without 'with'.

× Yes, in my country, many people love sending the flower to their lovers in Valentine's Day, especially for rose because rose is symbolized the love, the meaning of love and which help us to express our feelings and feel to our lovers it's also shows that we.

✓ Yes, in my country, many people love sending flowers to their lovers on Valentine's Day, especially roses because roses symbolize love, the meaning of love, and help us express our feelings to our lovers. It also shows that we...

'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'In Valentine's Day' should be 'on Valentine's Day'. 'Especially for rose' should be 'especially roses'. 'Rose is symbolized the love' is incorrect; 'roses symbolize love' is correct. 'Feel to our lovers' is incorrect; 'express our feelings to our lovers' is correct. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.