Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较简短，表达不够自然。建议用更自然的表达方式，并稍作扩展说明自己的感受。

例: I don't love flowers very much, but I do appreciate their beauty and the positive atmosphere they create.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“on either online or in the shop”和“put them in the vases such as Jasmine's and Lily's”。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She often buys flowers online or from shops and puts them in vases, like jasmine and lilies.

提案: 回答内容较好，但“Jasmine's”错误使用了所有格，且可以增加更多细节使回答更丰富。

例: There are many flowers along the roads where I live, such as daisies and jasmine, which really brighten up the city and make it more welcoming.

提案: 表达不够自然，“bring me good mood”应改为“improve my mood”或“make me feel happy”。建议扩展说明拍花的原因。

例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they make me feel happy and help me relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，如“in some vegetables”和“a bunch of connection”，导致意思不清。建议使用正确的词汇和句型，明确表达送花的场合和原因。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions, such as Mother's Day, when children buy bouquets to show their appreciation to their mothers.

× She always buys flowers on either online or in the shop and put them in the vases such as Jasmine's and Lily's.

✓ She always buys flowers either online or in the shop and puts them in vases such as jasmine and lilies.

句中“on either online”是不正确的介词搭配，正确用法是“either online or in the shop”。此外，“put”应与主语“she”保持第三人称单数一致，改为“puts”。“the vases”前的定冠词不必要，且“Jasmine's and Lily's”应为复数名词“jasmine and lilies”，表示花的种类。

× She always buys flowers on either online or in the shop and put them in the vases such as Jasmine's and Lily's.

✓ She always buys flowers either online or in the shop and puts them in vases such as jasmine and lilies.

“Jasmine's and Lily's”错误地使用了所有格形式，且应使用复数形式表示花的种类，正确为“jasmine and lilies”。

× I can see a lot of flowers along the roads, such as daisies and Jasmine's, which can really brighten our cities.

✓ I can see a lot of flowers along the roads, such as daisies and jasmines, which can really brighten our cities.

“Jasmine's”错误地使用了所有格形式，且应使用复数形式“jasmines”表示多种花。

× People often send flowers to others in some vegetables, like for example in Mother's Day, children will buy a bunch of connection to their mother to show their gratitude.

✓ People often send flowers to others on some occasions, for example, on Mother's Day, children will buy a bunch of flowers for their mother to show their gratitude.

“in some vegetables”用词错误，应为“on some occasions”表示“在某些场合”。“in Mother's Day”应为“on Mother's Day”，表示特定日期。句中“a bunch of connection”错误，应为“a bunch of flowers”。“to their mother”应改为“for their mother”，表示赠送对象。