Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“don't very like”应为“don't really like”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意时态和主谓一致。此外，回答应更简洁，避免重复。

例: Actually, I don't really like flowers, but I know my friends do. One of my friends always plants sunflowers at home, which look very beautiful. Seeing flowers makes me feel happy and relaxed.

提案: 回答中出现了人称混淆和语法错误，如“my best friends”应为“my best friend”，“She he”混用。建议注意人称一致和句子结构，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, my best friend loves flowers and often buys them for me. When I receive flowers, I feel very happy. He also plants sunflowers at his home.

提案: 回答内容较好，但存在词汇使用不准确的问题，如“rose or Peach flowers”应为“roses or peach blossoms”。建议使用正确的复数形式和更丰富的词汇，同时避免重复“beautiful”。

例: Yes, my hometown has many flowers, including sunflowers, roses, peach blossoms, and pear blossoms. They add a lot of beauty to the environment.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“like take”应为“like to take”，“smell very smelly”表达重复且不准确。建议使用正确的动词形式和更恰当的形容词，表达更自然。

例: Actually, I like to take photos of flowers because they are colorful and beautiful. Their fragrance also makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达不清的问题，如“buy some rose”应为“buy some roses”，“It is very useful things to shows”表达不明确。建议使用更准确的表达，清晰说明送花的意义。

例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, students give sunflowers to their teachers, and friends buy roses for their partners. Sending flowers is a meaningful way to show appreciation and love.

× Actually I don't very like flowers, but I know my friends very like flowers.

✓ Actually I don't like flowers very much, but I know my friends like flowers very much.

动词后面接动名词时，'like'后面不应该直接跟动词原形，且'like'后面需要用副词'much'来修饰程度，'very like'是不正确的表达。

× She always plants some flowers like sunflowers in her home.

✓ She always plants some flowers like sunflowers in her home.

此句无错误，'She always plants'符合第三人称单数动词形式。

× when I saw the flowers I will feel very happy and comfortable.

✓ when I see the flowers I feel very happy and comfortable.

句中时态不一致，'when I saw'是过去时，后面用'will feel'表示将来时，应该统一为一般现在时，表达习惯性动作。

× Yes, my best friends like flowers very much and he always buys some flowers for me.

✓ Yes, my best friend likes flowers very much and he always buys some flowers for me.

'best friends'是复数，后面用单数代词'he'不匹配，应改为单数'best friend'。

× When I see these flowers I feel very glad and happy. She he always plant some flowers in her home such as sunflowers.

✓ When I see these flowers I feel very glad and happy. He always plants some flowers in his home such as sunflowers.

句中代词混用'She he'错误，且动词'plant'应加第三人称单数形式's'。

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my hometown, such as sunflowers, rose or Peach flowers, and pear flowers.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers in my hometown, such as sunflowers, roses, peach flowers, and pear flowers.

列举多个花名时应使用复数形式，如'rose'应为'roses'。

× Actually I like take some photos for flowers because I think they are very beautiful and much color and also they smell very smelly and take photo for some flowers can make me very comfortable and happy.

✓ Actually I like taking some photos of flowers because I think they are very beautiful and colorful, and also they smell very nice. Taking photos of some flowers can make me very comfortable and happy.

'like'后应接动名词'taking'，'take photo for'应改为'taking photos of'，'much color'应改为'colorful'，'smell very smelly'表达重复且错误，应改为'smell very nice'。

× Actually I like take some photos for flowers because I think they are very beautiful and much color and also they smell very smelly and take photo for some flowers can make me very comfortable and happy.

✓ Actually I like taking some photos of flowers because I think they are very beautiful and colorful, and also they smell very nice. Taking photos of some flowers can make me very comfortable and happy.

'take photos for flowers'中的介词'for'用错，应使用'of'表示拍摄对象。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, such as they always buy some sunflowers to a teacher or friends buy some rose for their girlfriends or boyfriends.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, such as they always buy some sunflowers for a teacher or friends buy some roses for their girlfriends or boyfriends.

'some rose'应为复数'some roses'，且介词'to'应改为'for'表示赠送对象。

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, such as they always buy some sunflowers to a teacher or friends buy some rose for their girlfriends or boyfriends.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, such as they always buy some sunflowers for a teacher or friends buy some roses for their girlfriends or boyfriends.

'buy some sunflowers to a teacher'中介词'to'用错，应使用'for'表示赠送对象。

× It is very useful things to shows.

✓ They are very useful things to show.

'It is'与复数名词'things'不匹配，应改为'they are'，'shows'应为动词原形'show'。