Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý đến cách dùng từ và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors always catch my eye and make me feel relaxed. I also enjoy having flowers in my room as they brighten up the space and lift my mood.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi sai và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, my grandfather loves flowers very much. He enjoys planting trees and has a large garden full of roses and other beautiful flowers.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

例: I live in an urban area with narrow alleys, so there aren't many flowers around. However, my grandfather has planted several trees and flowers in small pots near his house.

提案: Câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I am an amateur photographer and enjoy taking photos of flowers, landscapes, and scenery. I often keep these pictures to create photo albums and projects.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng liên từ hợp lý và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: It depends on the occasion. People usually send flowers during holidays or special events, and couples often give flowers to express their love and gratitude.

× He really love to planting trees and flowers and also he has a massive garden of flowers like roses and some kind of then the lions to make me.

✓ He really loves planting trees and flowers and also he has a massive garden of flowers like roses and some kinds of tulips to show me.

The verb 'love' in third person singular requires an 's' ending, so 'love' should be 'loves'. After 'love', the verb should be in the gerund form '-ing', so 'to planting' is incorrect; it should be 'planting'. Also, 'some kind of then the lions' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'some kinds of tulips'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× He really love to planting trees and flowers and also he has a massive garden of flowers like roses and some kind of then the lions to make me.

✓ He really loves planting trees and flowers and also he has a massive garden of flowers like roses and some kinds of tulips to show me.

In the third person singular, verbs in the present tense require an 's' at the end. 'He love' is incorrect; it should be 'He loves'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× Since I live in a urban area and the small alley, so there are not a lot flowers in where I live, but my grandfather planted a lot of trees and flowers like in the small bucket in my.

✓ Since I live in an urban area and a small alley, there are not a lot of flowers where I live, but my grandfather planted a lot of trees and flowers in small buckets at my place.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'urban'. 'The small alley' should be 'a small alley' to indicate one among many. 'A lot flowers' is missing the preposition 'of' and should be 'a lot of flowers'. Also, 'in where I live' is incorrect; 'where I live' suffices. 'In the small bucket in my' is incomplete and corrected to 'in small buckets at my place' for clarity.

× Since I live in a urban area and the small alley, so there are not a lot flowers in where I live, but my grandfather planted a lot of trees and flowers like in the small bucket in my.

✓ Since I live in an urban area and a small alley, there are not a lot of flowers where I live, but my grandfather planted a lot of trees and flowers in small buckets at my place.

The preposition 'in' before 'where I live' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also, 'like in the small bucket in my' is unclear and should be 'in small buckets at my place' to correctly express location.

× I think it's depend on on the any circumstances because if it is the holiday or some kinds of event, they will send flowers to the others or some couples that they really want to send flowers to express their gratitude and their love to the others in my country.

✓ I think it depends on the circumstances because if it is a holiday or some kind of event, they will send flowers to others or some couples who really want to send flowers to express their gratitude and their love to others in my country.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' in present tense third person singular. 'On on the any circumstances' has repeated prepositions and an unnecessary article; it should be 'on the circumstances'. 'Some kinds of event' should be 'some kind of event' for singular collective meaning. 'The others' should be 'others' without 'the' when referring generally. 'Some couples that they really want' should be 'some couples who really want' to correctly use relative pronouns.