Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但“and so on”显得不够具体，且“closer to the nature”中“the”使用不当，应为“nature”。建议避免使用模糊表达，注意冠词使用。

例: Yes, I love flowers like roses, sunflowers, and tulips because they add beauty and freshness to my surroundings. Their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrances always lift my mood and make me feel more connected to nature.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“she get up”应为“she gets up”，表达不够清晰，“jungle of flowers and vessels”用词不当，且“zone we home with ******* old songs”含糊不清。建议使用准确词汇，注意语法，表达清晰。

例: Yes, my grandma loves flowers. Every morning, she gets up early to tend to her garden, which is full of various flowers and pots. She often listens to old songs while watering them, which seems to help the plants grow well.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“In not only enhance”应为“they not only enhance”，“passengers”用词不当，应为“people”或“visitors”，“waiters”用词错误，应为“walkers”或“visitors”，“brights out”表达错误。建议注意语法和词汇准确性。

例: Yes, there are many flowers in my hometown, especially in parks and along the streets. They not only enhance the beauty of the city but also make people feel happier and more relaxed when they are outside. For example, during spring, the colorful blossoms attract many visitors and brighten up the whole area.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“can helps”应为“can help”，表达不够流畅，“gives me courage to put forward thinking”表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I like taking photos of flowers in my daily life because it helps me relax after a busy day and reminds me that there are still many beautiful things in the world.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“flowers are symbolized of”应为“flowers symbolize”，“sending us a present”表达不当，句子未完成。建议注意语法，完整表达观点。

例: Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers symbolize purity and beauty. They are a popular gift choice, especially on important occasions such as birthdays and anniversaries.

× Their vibrant color and pleasant fragrances always lift my mood and help me feel closer to the nature.

✓ Their vibrant colors and pleasant fragrances always lift my mood and help me feel closer to nature.

“color”应为复数形式“colors”，因为前面用了复数代词“their”，表示多种颜色；“the nature”中“nature”是不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。

× Every morning she get up early to come to her garden, which is a jungle of flowers and vessels.

✓ Every morning she gets up early to come to her garden, which is a jungle of flowers and vessels.

主语是第三人称单数“she”，谓语动词“get”应加-s变为“gets”。

× She watered the zone we home with ******* old songs, helping them to grow quickly.

✓ She watered the zone where we live with ******* old songs, helping them to grow quickly.

“we home”用法错误，应改为“where we live”表示“我们居住的地方”。

× In not only enhance the beauty of the city, but also make the passengers feel happier and relaxed when they are outside.

✓ They not only enhance the beauty of the city, but also make the passengers feel happier and more relaxed when they are outside.

句子缺少主语，应加上“they”；“not only... but also”结构中，动词应与主语一致；“relaxed”前应加“more”表示比较级。

× For example, during spring, the colorful blossoms attracts many waiters and brights out the whole area.

✓ For example, during spring, the colorful blossoms attract many visitors and brighten up the whole area.

“blossoms”是复数，谓语动词应用复数形式“attract”；“waiters”应为“visitors”更符合语境；“brights out”错误，应为“brighten up”。

× Yes, I like taking photos of flowers in my daily life because it can helps me refresh after a busy day and gives me courage to put forward thinking there are still many beautiful things in the world.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of flowers in my daily life because it can help me refresh after a busy day and gives me courage to keep thinking that there are still many beautiful things in the world.

情态动词“can”后动词用原形，“helps”应改为“help”；“put forward thinking”表达不当，应改为“keep thinking”。

× Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers are symbolized of purity and beauty in my country and it is a great choice for sending us a present, especially during some important occasions such as birthdays and.

✓ Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others because flowers symbolize purity and beauty in my country and they are a great choice for giving presents, especially during important occasions such as birthdays.

“are symbolized of”错误，应为“symbolize”；“it is a great choice for sending us a present”表达不当，应改为“they are a great choice for giving presents”；句末“and”后无内容，应删除。