Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢花的原因，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误和重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

例: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance makes me feel relaxed and happy. They also brighten up my mood and surroundings.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子直接表达观点，并用具体细节支持，如说明为什么玫瑰花有浪漫意义。

例: Yes, my girlfriend loves flowers, especially roses, because they symbolize love and romance. She often feels happy when she receives them.

提案: 回答中表达不流畅，信息重复且不够具体。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子说明居住环境中花的情况。

例: I live in a big city, so there are not many flowers around me. For example, I rarely see sunflowers or other colorful flowers nearby.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简洁明了地表达自己喜欢拍花的原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers because they are beautiful. My mother also loves flowers, so sometimes we take pictures together with them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯。建议用简单句子直接说明送花的习惯，并举例说明不同场合送花的意义。

例: In my country, people usually send flowers on special occasions. For example, families send flowers to celebrate graduations, and lovers give flowers to express their feelings.

× This is because flowers can make me feel more relaxing because flower have a have it have a smell that lets people to feel happy and also more exciting.

✓ This is because flowers can make me feel more relaxed because flowers have a smell that lets people feel happy and also more excited.

这里的错误是单复数不一致。'flower' 应该用复数形式 'flowers'，因为前面提到的是复数的花。'have a have it have a smell' 是重复错误，应简化为 'have a smell'。另外，'feel more relaxing' 应改为 'feel more relaxed'，因为 'relaxed' 是形容人的感受，'relaxing' 是形容事物的特性。

× flower have a have it have a smell that lets people to feel happy and also more exciting.

✓ flowers have a smell that lets people feel happy and also more excited.

这里 'lets people to feel' 中 'to' 不应该出现，动词 'let' 后面直接跟动词原形。'more exciting' 应改为 'more excited'，因为人感到兴奋用形容词 'excited'。

× I know that my girlfriend she do love flowers, especially rose, because rose has romantic the meaningful, so the the meaningful of roles have very been have a expression the love of her.

✓ I know that my girlfriend does love flowers, especially roses, because roses are romantic and meaningful, so the meaning of roses expresses her love very well.

这里 'my girlfriend she do love' 中 'she' 是多余的，且 'do' 应该用第三人称单数 'does'。'rose' 应用复数 'roses'。'has romantic the meaningful' 语序错误，应为 'are romantic and meaningful'。句子结构混乱，需要调整使其通顺。

× especially rose, because rose has romantic the meaningful

✓ especially roses, because roses are romantic and meaningful

'rose' 应该用复数形式 'roses'，因为指的是一般的玫瑰花。

× I know that my girlfriend she do love flowers

✓ I know that my girlfriend does love flowers

句中 'my girlfriend she' 出现了重复主语，应去掉 'she'。动词 'do' 应改为第三人称单数 'does'。

× I think my area did not have many flowers close to me because I did not like live in a while.

✓ I think my area does not have many flowers close to me because I do not like living in the countryside.

这里时态使用错误，描述现在情况应使用现在时。'did not like live' 语法错误，应为 'do not like living'。'in a while' 语义不清，推测为 'in the countryside'。

× I think my area did not have many flowers close to me

✓ I think my area does not have many flowers close to me

描述现在的事实，应使用一般现在时 'does not have'，而不是过去时 'did not have'。

× I did not have a lot of flowers announcement such as sunflower.

✓ I do not have a lot of flowers around me such as sunflowers.

'announcement' 词用错，应为 'around me'。'sunflower' 应用复数 'sunflowers'。时态应为现在时。

× I did not see any sunflower around that close to me.

✓ I do not see any sunflowers around close to me.

描述现在情况，应使用现在时 'do not see'。'sunflower' 应用复数 'sunflowers'。

× I I am a person who loves take photo.

✓ I am a person who loves taking photos.

'loves take photo' 语法错误，动词 'love' 后应接动名词 'taking'。'photo' 应用复数 'photos'。

× I also like to take some beautiful views including the far photo.

✓ I also like to take some beautiful photos, including flower photos.

'take some beautiful views' 用词不当，应为 'take some beautiful photos'。'far photo' 可能是 'flower photo' 的误写。

× My mother also loves flowers because she thinks flower is kind of like the expression love.

✓ My mother also loves flowers because she thinks flowers are a kind of expression of love.

'flower' 应用复数 'flowers'。'expression love' 应为 'expression of love'。

× So I rather than to take photo with my mom and flowers.

✓ So I prefer to take photos with my mom and flowers.

'rather than to take photo' 结构错误，应改为 'prefer to take photos'。

× In my country people do not send fouls to others.

✓ In my country, people do not send flowers to others.

'fouls' 是拼写错误，应为 'flowers'。

× Most of the time selling flowers is depend on situations.

✓ Most of the time, selling flowers depends on the situation.

'is depend on' 语法错误，应为 'depends on'。

× For example like someone graduate so people the families will send the flowers to to like celebrate her graduation or lover send the flowers to others to show their love so.

✓ For example, when someone graduates, their family will send flowers to celebrate the graduation, or lovers send flowers to others to show their love.

'someone graduate' 应为 'someone graduates'。'people the families' 结构混乱，应简化为 'their family'。句子结构需调整使其通顺。