Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用，同时避免冗余，简洁表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers very much. My favorites are sunflowers and blue flowers like forget-me-nots and irises because of their beautiful colors.

提案: 回答不连贯且有词汇错误，建议使用完整句子表达，注意单复数和词汇准确性，避免断句。

例: Yes, both my mother and I love flowers. We often buy some and arrange them nicely at home.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的词汇和连贯的句子表达具体细节。

例: Yes, near my home there is a park full of hydrangeas. Most of them are blue, but some are pink, which makes the park very beautiful.

提案: 回答不完整且断断续续，建议用完整句子表达，说明拍摄花朵的频率和原因，避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I love taking photos of flowers. I often look for good compositions to capture their beauty, especially when the lighting is perfect.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, people often send bouquets to celebrate special occasions or to wish someone well. For example, I often see students giving flowers to their girlfriends at my university.

× Of course, one of my favorite things is enjoy the flowers.

✓ Of course, one of my favorite things is enjoying the flowers.

动词不定式后面作为表语时，应该用动名词形式。这里的动词enjoy应改为动名词enjoying。

× I like all the flowers, especially sunflower, that blue such as forget me know, or Iris.

✓ I like all the flowers, especially sunflowers, those blue ones such as forget-me-not, or iris.

名词复数形式错误，sunflower应为sunflowers；指示代词使用错误，that应为those；植物名称拼写错误，forget me know应为forget-me-not。

× They have beautiful color.

✓ They have beautiful colors.

颜色是可数名词，复数形式应为colors。

× Totally both me and my mother love flower.

✓ Totally both me and my mother love flowers.

flower应为复数flowers，表示一般的花。

× We often buy some flour and try to put them as a. Good, chief. Yes.

✓ We often buy some flowers and try to put them as a good gift. Yes.

flour是面粉，应为flowers；短语表达不清，推测意为作为礼物，改为a good gift。

× just near my home, there is a park that covered via a lot of hydr.

✓ Just near my home, there is a park that is covered with a lot of hydrangeas.

动词被动形式缺失，应加is covered；介词via用错，应为with；hydr应为hydrangeas。

× There are most blue, but some of them are pink.

✓ Most of them are blue, but some of them are pink.

there are most blue表达不正确，应为most of them are blue。

× I often. Want to find some composition? And take a. Good photo of them.

✓ I often want to find some compositions and take good photos of them.

composition和photo应为复数形式；句子断裂，应连贯表达。

× Especially when I was.

✓ Especially when I was there.

句子不完整，缺少地点或时间状语，补充there使句子完整。

× Yes, sometime people will buy some bouquets to celebrate something or make best wishes to someone.

✓ Yes, sometimes people will buy bouquets to celebrate something or send best wishes to someone.

sometime应为sometimes；some bouquets中some可省略；make best wishes表达不当，应为send best wishes。

× I often see the student just bring some bookings to their girlfriend in my university.

✓ I often see students just bring some bouquets to their girlfriends in my university.

the student应为students，复数形式；bookings拼写错误，应为bouquets；girlfriend应为girlfriends，复数形式。