Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但有些表达不够地道，如“I'm really a big fan of the beautiful flowers”可以更简洁自然。句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使内容更连贯。建议使用更地道的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: Yes, I really love flowers because of their vibrant colors and delicate petals. Whenever I pass by flower shops, I often stop to admire their beauty.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“poured the flowers into the pot”不准确，且句子结构混乱。建议注意时态一致，使用正确的动词表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: My mom loves flowers a lot. When she buys them, she prepares the soil and plants them in pots. As they grow, she prunes their branches and leaves to keep them healthy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“there are rose, Daisy”应为复数形式。句子较为简单，缺少连接词，表达不够连贯。建议注意名词复数形式，使用连接词，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In fact, I often feel like I am living in a beautiful garden because of the variety of flowers, such as roses and daisies. They grow not only along the streets but also in large park areas.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但有些用词不准确，如“taking photos for them”应为“taking photos of them”。句子结构简单，缺少连接词。建议注意介词使用，丰富句型，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: That's an interesting question. I prefer touching or smelling flowers rather than taking photos of them because it helps me appreciate their beauty and feel closer to nature, which lifts my spirits.

提案: 回答内容完整，但存在语法和表达错误，如“the Mother Days”应为“Mother's Day”，句子结构略显简单。建议注意专有名词的正确形式，使用更丰富的句型和连接词。

例: Yes, sending flowers is very common in my country. I believe flowers symbolize gratitude and blessings. For example, on Mother's Day or Father's Day, children often send flowers to their parents to express their love.

× When I came across some flower shops, I usually linger to appreciate them.

✓ When I come across some flower shops, I usually linger to appreciate them.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。'came'是过去式，改为'come'符合习惯性动作的时态要求。

× When she bought some flowers back home, she often prepared the soil, poured the flowers into the pot and when when there are growing, my mom pruned their branches and leaves to stay healthy.

✓ When she buys some flowers back home, she often prepares the soil, puts the flowers into the pot and when they are growing, my mom prunes their branches and leaves to keep them healthy.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时。'bought'和'prepared'应改为'buy'和'prepare'。'poured the flowers into the pot'不合适，改为'puts the flowers into the pot'更准确。'when when there are growing'重复且语法错误，改为'when they are growing'。'pruned'改为'prunes'以符合主语和时态。'to stay healthy'改为'to keep them healthy'更自然。

× There are rose, Daisy and so on.

✓ There are roses, daisies and so on.

'rose'和'Daisy'应使用复数形式，因为前面用了复数动词'are'，表示多种花。

× They are not only beside the streets, but also in the big areas of the parks.

✓ They are not only beside the streets, but also in the large areas of the parks.

'big areas'用词不准确，'large areas'更符合表达习惯。

× I think the reason is that it's a good way to appreciate them and get closer to the nature and lift my spirit.

✓ I think the reason is that it's a good way to appreciate them, get closer to nature and lift my spirit.

'the nature'中'nature'是不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词'the'。

× When the Mother Days or Father's Day is coming, their children will send flowers to them to express their love.

✓ When Mother's Day or Father's Day is coming, their children will send flowers to them to express their love.

'Mother Days'应为单数形式'Mother's Day'，因为每年只有一个母亲节。