Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。

例: I love flowers when I am in a good mood because their fragrance makes me feel relaxed. However, when I am upset, even seeing flowers can annoy me.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅，避免重复。

例: I haven't asked my friends about their interest in flowers before, so I don't know anyone who loves them. But if I get a chance, I would like to find out which flowers they prefer.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，建议注意句子结构，使用合适的连接词，表达更清晰。

例: There used to be many beautiful flowers where I live, but a few weeks ago, repairmen dug up the ground to fix underground water pipes, so most of the flowers were destroyed.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，避免重复词汇。

例: I rarely take photos of flowers because I'm not into photography. However, I often visit nearby gardens or parks just to enjoy the flowers.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议理清思路，使用简单句表达观点，避免重复和不连贯。

例: Sending flowers is common during important festivals in my country. For example, Chinese people often send flowers to their mothers. However, I prefer to give practical gifts like skincare products instead of flowers.

× When I'm happy I really enjoying their flowers fragrance, it makes me feel relaxed.

✓ When I'm happy I really enjoy their flowers' fragrance, it makes me feel relaxed.

句子中使用了现在进行时 "enjoying"，但这里描述的是一种习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 "enjoy"。此外，"flowers fragrance" 应为所有格形式 "flowers' fragrance"。

× Actually I don't know anyone who loves flowers because I have never asked my friends in their about their interesting in flowers before and and if I get a chance someday I would find I would love to find out what kind of flowers they prefer and it it.

✓ Actually I don't know anyone who loves flowers because I have never asked my friends about their interest in flowers before, and if I get a chance someday I would love to find out what kind of flowers they prefer.

短语中 "asked my friends in their about their interesting in flowers" 结构混乱，应改为 "asked my friends about their interest in flowers"。"interesting" 应为名词 "interest"。句子中重复 "and and" 和 "I would find I would" 也需删除。

× To be honest, there used to be a lot of beautiful flowers and but a few weeks ago some repairman dug dug up the ground to fix underground water pipes so some most of flowers were destroyed.

✓ To be honest, there used to be a lot of beautiful flowers, but a few weeks ago some repairmen dug up the ground to fix underground water pipes, so most of the flowers were destroyed.

"and but" 是错误的连词搭配，应只用 "but"。"some repairman" 应为复数 "some repairmen"。"some most of flowers" 结构错误，应为 "most of the flowers"。

× I rarely take photos of flowers because I'm not really into photography, but I usually often I usually visit some gardens or the parks which is near my home and just to enjoy it.

✓ I rarely take photos of flowers because I'm not really into photography, but I usually visit some gardens or parks near my home just to enjoy them.

"usually often I usually" 重复，应删去多余部分。"the parks which is near my home" 中 "parks" 是复数，谓语应为 "are"，且不需要定冠词 "the"。"just to enjoy it" 中 "it" 指代不明，应改为复数 "them" 指代 "gardens or parks"。

× Def definitely is special during the important festivals and people such As for example Chinese people usually send connections to their mothers and but for me I usually will choose more practical things rather than flowers such as skin care.

✓ Definitely, it is special during important festivals, and people, such as Chinese people, usually send flowers to their mothers. But for me, I usually choose more practical things rather than flowers, such as skin care products.

句子中 "Def definitely is special" 缺少主语，应加 "it"。"people such As for example" 结构混乱，应改为 "people, such as"。"send connections" 应为 "send flowers"。"and but" 连词错误，应拆分为两个句子。"skin care" 应为 "skin care products" 更完整。