Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and relevant, but there is a repetition error ('where I have where I have'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, you can say 'I have a garden at home where I have planted roses, hibiscus, and several other wildflowers because I've loved flowers since I was a child.'

例: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. I have a garden at home where I have planted roses, hibiscus, and several other wildflowers because I've loved flowers since I was a child.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, you can use linking words to connect your sentences and add a bit more detail to enrich your response. For example, 'One person who immediately comes to mind when I think of flowers is my mother because she taught me how to take care of them and helped me start my home garden.'

例: One person who immediately comes to mind when I think of flowers is my mother because she taught me how to take care of them and helped me start my home garden.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid repeating 'flowers' unnecessarily and use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, 'No, not really. Since I live in a city, you don't see many flowers except for those in parks and potted plants.'

例: No, not really. Since I live in a city, you don't see many flowers except for those in parks and potted plants.

提案: Your answer is good and clear. To improve, you can use more natural phrasing and linking words. For example, 'Whenever I see an exceptional flower, I take a picture of it so I can share it with my mother, who loves flowers.'

例: Whenever I see an exceptional flower, I take a picture of it so I can share it with my mother, who loves flowers.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid using 'let's say' in formal speaking and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Sending flowers is not really ingrained in our culture for occasions like celebrations or funerals; instead, we usually give other types of gifts.'

例: Sending flowers is not really ingrained in our culture for occasions like celebrations or funerals; instead, we usually give other types of gifts.

× I've been loving flowers ever since I was a child.

✓ I've loved flowers ever since I was a child.

The verb 'love' is a stative verb and is not typically used in the continuous form. Using 'have loved' (present perfect) correctly expresses a state that started in the past and continues to the present.

× Since I live in a city you don't get to see much flowers other than the flowers and parks and potted flowers.

✓ Since I live in a city you don't get to see many flowers other than the flowers in parks and potted flowers.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'flowers' is countable plural, so 'many' should be used instead. Also, adding 'in' before 'parks' clarifies the meaning.