Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了观点，但用词较为简单且语法有误，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: No, I'm not very fond of flowers because they tend to attract insects like bees, which I find quite bothersome.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She has a whole garden filled with them and even keeps some inside her house because she believes flowers symbolize love.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有较大问题，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并使用合适的词汇。

例: No, I live in the city where there isn't enough space for many flowers or trees.

提案: 表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议使用更流畅的表达并解释原因。

例: No, I usually don't take photos of flowers because I don't find it necessary to keep pictures of them on my phone.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，建议完整回答问题并使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

例: Yes, in my country, men often give flowers to their partners on anniversaries or special occasions. It's also common to give flowers to elderly people on their birthdays or during Chinese New Year.

× Yes, my grandmother is into flower.

✓ Yes, my grandmother is into flowers.

flower 是可数名词，表示花朵，复数形式应为 flowers。这里表示她喜欢花，应该用复数形式。

× She got a whole garden to fill them and even place it in her house.

✓ She has a whole garden to fill with them and even places them in her house.

garden 是单数，动词应用第三人称单数形式 has 和 places；fill 后面应接介词 with；place 后面应接复数代词 them，指代 flowers。

× No, see now I'm living in the city, there is no enough spaces for flowers that we need to be general, have its flesh and tree.

✓ No, see now I'm living in the city, there is not enough space for flowers; we need to be general, have its flesh and tree.

space 是不可数名词，不能用复数 spaces；否定句中应使用 there is not；句子结构混乱，建议分号连接。

× She got a whole garden to fill them and even place it in her house.

✓ She has a whole garden to fill with them and even places them in her house.

动词 fill 后应接介词 with，表示用某物填充。

× She got a whole garden to fill them and even place it in her house.

✓ She has a whole garden to fill with them and even places them in her house.

主语是第三人称单数 she，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 has 和 places。

× She got a whole garden to fill them and even place it in her house.

✓ She has a whole garden to fill with them and even places them in her house.

them 指代复数 flowers，place 后应接复数代词 them，而不是 it。

× No, see now I'm living in the city, there is no enough spaces for flowers that we need to be general, have its flesh and tree.

✓ No, see now I'm living in the city, there is not enough space for flowers; we need to be general, have its flesh and tree.

enough 前不加 no，否定用 not enough；space 是不可数名词，不用复数形式 spaces。

× I think no one will give me rose anytime.

✓ I think no one will give me a rose anytime.

rose 是可数名词，单数时前面需要冠词 a。

× Yes, men often give their momentum partners flowers on anniversary or volunteers.

✓ Yes, men often give their romantic partners flowers on anniversaries or Valentine's Day.

momentum 是错误词，应为 romantic；anniversary 需复数 anniversaries；volunteers 用词错误，应为 Valentine's Day（情人节）。

× Also, it is common for giving flowers to older people on their birthday or Chinese New Year because.

✓ Also, it is common to give flowers to older people on their birthday or Chinese New Year.

句子不完整，because 后无内容；for giving 应改为 to give，符合习惯用法。