Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

例: Yes, I love flowers because they add color and create a lively atmosphere around us. At home, I often pick fresh flowers to decorate, which makes the environment more elegant.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意时态一致，避免重复，并补充完整句子。

例: Yes, my mom loves flowers. She once told me a story about how my father confessed his love to her with a bunch of flowers, which left a deep impression and made her passionate about flowers.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和词汇，并使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I live in southern China where the climate is suitable for many flowers. Moreover, the government invests in parks to plant more flowers and improve the environment.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，建议使用更简洁的句子并注意主谓一致。

例: Not often. Flowers are common in daily life, so I only take photos when I see something really beautiful or breathtaking, like sunflowers.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

例: No, people usually send flowers on special occasions like Valentine's Day to express love or respect, but it's not very common otherwise.

× I enjoyed that first flower, just add colors and vivid atmosphere in the environment around us and 2nd when I stay at home I usually pick some flash flowers to decorate my house which can make a comment elegant atmosphere in home.

✓ I enjoyed that first flower, it just adds color and a vivid atmosphere to the environment around us. And secondly, when I stay at home, I usually pick some fresh flowers to decorate my house, which can create a calm and elegant atmosphere at home.

句中“add colors”应为“adds color”，因为主语是单数“that first flower”，动词需用第三人称单数形式。"flash flowers"应为"fresh flowers"，是拼写错误。"a comment elegant atmosphere"应为"a calm and elegant atmosphere"，形容词顺序和用词错误。"in home"应为"at home"，介词使用错误。

× That moment leave a deep impressions on her, which is why she became she become passionate to the flower and.

✓ That moment left a deep impression on her, which is why she became passionate about flowers.

“leave”应为过去式“left”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。"impressions"应为单数"impression"，因为这里指的是一次深刻的印象。"she became she become"重复，应删去多余部分。"passionate to the flower"应为"passionate about flowers"，介词和名词单复数使用错误。

× since I live in live at the southern part of China where the climate here is actually very suitable for the growth of the flowers.

✓ since I live in the southern part of China where the climate is actually very suitable for the growth of flowers.

“live in live at”重复，应删去多余部分。"the growth of the flowers"中“the flowers”不需要定冠词，应为复数名词“flowers”。

× And what's more, government is actually pay a lot of attention to the environment so that they just invest money to the park buildings where they build the plan.

✓ And what's more, the government actually pays a lot of attention to the environment, so they invest money in park buildings where they build the plants.

“government”前应加定冠词“the”。“is actually pay”动词形式错误，应为“actually pays”。“invest money to”应为“invest money in”，介词使用错误。"the plan"应为"the plants"，拼写错误。

× flowers is actually a kind of a fundamental element of our daily life.

✓ flowers are actually a kind of fundamental element of our daily life.

“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× So when I just run into sunflowers, unless it was that beautiful or quite breathtaking, then I would not take any photos.

✓ So when I just run into sunflowers, unless they are that beautiful or quite breathtaking, then I would not take any photos.

“sunflowers”是复数，后面指代应使用复数代词“they”，且时态应与条件句保持一致，使用现在时“are”。

× No, I don't think so because flowers is actually a special gift that I usually use in the association that confessing your love or show your respect, show your respect to others.

✓ No, I don't think so because flowers are actually a special gift that I usually use in occasions like confessing your love or showing your respect to others.

“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。“association”应为“occasions”，语义更合适。动词形式应保持一致，使用动名词“showing”。

× So I think sending flowers is actually happen between couples on Valentine's Day or sons.

✓ So I think sending flowers actually happens between couples on Valentine's Day or on other occasions.

“is actually happen”动词形式错误，应为“actually happens”。“sons”用词错误，语义不明，改为“other occasions”更合适。